| "Then From Love until Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 169 ] |
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Reviewed By: kp On: August 29, 2004 13:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cooome oooonn!!!! update sooon!!!! im tired of waiting!!! im anxious to know the end!!!
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Reviewed By: earthshine411 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 19:40 CDT
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*snuffles back tears* Wonderful. What a wonderfully angsty, attention-devouring fic. I love this sequel. Yesterday I read the prequel, and today I read this. The plot was beautifully woven to catch and hold my attention, making me grieve along with Inuyasha and yearn for Kagome to regain her memories. I liked how you added Kaede to the mix (it's hard to have a story without her), and I wonder if she'll show up ever again? I was pleased to see that Kouga refused to truly hurt Rin. Kouga truly isn't a dastardly person; and I was glad you showed that: especially when it counted. -- You had me fuming when Kikyou was trying to sway Yasha into a physical relationship, grinning with joy when Kagome remembered herself, and blubbering when they finally met at his party, after so many years. I enjoyed the last chapter _immensely_, the whole family reunited under the pretense of Naraku being put away. I'm so excited and anxious to know what happens next. I know our questions will be answered soon. Kudos to you for such a wonderfully written story thus far; I simply can't wait for an update.
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Title: AMAZING!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: queen of my fairy tale On: August 03, 2004 01:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!! I loved your first story, and I'm absolutly loving this one too! I was afraid that it would be really angsty, but to my delighted suprise, it's perfect. Can't wait for the next chapter and I'm holding you to your promise of fluff!!
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Reviewed By: Jensempai101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 12:47 CDT
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yu seriously write long chapters even the first one was long but thats awesum! cait wait fer the next chapter update soon!
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Reviewed By: HAILY On: July 26, 2004 13:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job, I love the stoy. Please update soon!
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Title: Dont worry so much
Reviewed By: Mangetsu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 11:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't worry so much. I know what it is like to lose a whole chapter and then try to rewrite it. It never sounds the same, and you hate it. But, trust me when I tell you. This was wonderful. Don't change anything. It is perfect just the way it is. If you try and rewrite it again, you'll just make yourself crazy. Leave it alone and move forward. From one author to another... It was wonderful. I'm sorry to see the story winding down, but all good things come to an end. Then I can go read your 'Rivers' story. :) Kanzen ne Tsuki
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Reviewed By: tsuki_no_oni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 08:54 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow... *sniffles* that was so awesome. I want more...soon...please.... sorry about your comp, viruses are like satan spawn to fanfic authors. until next time! ^.^
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Title: review
Reviewed By: MoonTearGirl On: July 23, 2004 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! i love your stroy! i first began reading it on Fanfiction...but i wanted to know your dresses for his party. omg! can't wait until the next chapter! good job! Well done! bien! muy muy bien! ja ne!
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: xfiledino [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 18:57 CDT
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I love this story!! Keep up the great work!!
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Reviewed By: DemonKitty51 (not sighned in) On: July 20, 2004 02:56 CDT
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WOW!!! that was amazing!!!!! i loved it! that was a great chapter! sorry to hear about your computer, my computers fan burned out and i can only use it for brief moments! *tears* lucky i have my brother-in-laws laptop! *evil laughter* anyway, i can't wait for your next up date!
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 17:27 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this chappie was awsome so was the oringinal draft like perfect or something well can't wait to read more hope you up-date soon^_^
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 17:27 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this chappie was awsome so was the oringinal draft like perfect or something well can't wait to read more hope you up-date soon^_^
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Reviewed By: saccharine-ish (not logged on) On: July 18, 2004 13:10 CDT
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love it!!!! cant wait for the next chappie
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Reviewed By: KuramasGirl (not logged in) On: July 18, 2004 09:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am always amazed by your work. I literally cried in this chapter. It was so sweet and so perfect. Can't wait for the fluff. Hope there is some Sesshoumaru and Rin stuff... I really like how she broke through his shell... *tear*
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(n.s.o.) On: July 18, 2004 02:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't believe you when you say the original was better than this because that chapter rocked so hard!!!!!!!!!! My heart is still beating too fast!!!!!! You are such an amazing suspense writer!!!! I'm sorry about your computer! You should do what I did when my coputer started acting suspicious. I downlaoded a free virus scanner! It found some virus called Trojan horse and got rid of it!!! But anyway update as soon as you can with the fluffiness!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And doesn't this story have suspense as one of its genres???
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