| "Will you be mine?" Reviews/Comments [ 230 ] |
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Title: That kicked ass.
Reviewed By: Kaythan On: July 13, 2004 01:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story. I imagined everything coming to my mind as if it were a movie. The only thing is, you need to work on your spelling. Your grammar is perfectly fine. I don't personally enjoy your style too much, but the creativity was amazing. You should write a lemon between Inuyasha and Kagome after Kagome forgives him. Uh...if she forgives him anyway. Please continue as soon as possible.
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Reviewed By: VeRoN [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 23:42 EDT
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Ok, I am not going to say update cause i know it can be hard...but it was just so sad..i mean..poor Inu and Kag, they deserve to be together! Anyway, great chap, I hope to be reading more of this fic soon.
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 12:34 EDT
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Awww so sad> Poor Inu...Great chapter. UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: Doujo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 10:53 EDT
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yay! you update! i really like the last chappie you just did, it's really awesome... I wonder how Kagome and Inu Yasha will make up?! Update as soon as possible plz!!!!
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Reviewed By: InusDemones(n.s.o.) On: July 10, 2004 02:35 EDT
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I thought I was the only person up this late? But anyway, that cliffy was evil!!! Evil I tell you!!!!! I'm not speaking to you again until you update *crosses arms and points nose in the air like Inuyasha*
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Reviewed By: earthshine411 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 20:02 EDT
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Cute story. I'm enjoying it! Hope you update soon; I want to see how this all works out. Will Naraku have his way with Kagome? Will Yash persuade the King so he can have Kagome? Maybe the King'll hold a contest between Yash and Naraku, for Kagome's hand? Only time will tell... ^.^
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 15:59 EDT
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It was cute. How they first met. Hahahah she tricked him didn't she?!?! LMAO! LoL...Well cute chapter!!! Update soon please..
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: July 03, 2004 02:36 EDT
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I thought it was soooooooo cute!!!!!!!!! Update soon!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 00:23 EDT
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aaaaaaaawwwwww i can just picture them as kids too lol. kagome looks like a bully
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Reviewed By: Pyro Pixie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 20:42 EDT
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Hey this is pretty damn good I like it alot and will continue to read it, update at your own pace. Oh I have a question for you is Rin human in this story or what?
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Reviewed By: Doujo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 16:58 EDT
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I like your fic! you really have to update as soon as possible... keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 16:13 EDT
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your intamate moment was written out fine :). but the cliffy is tourture. I really hope you do start updateing weekly before i forget the story again.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: June 25, 2004 13:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad to see you're updating again, I didn't want to have to take this story off my favorit list.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 12:06 EDT
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Ya know it's really hard to keep up with so many stories at once. In the end your end up making at least set of reviewers cry.
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Title: HI:)
Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 12:06 EDT
Comment/Review:
me love this fic!!!!!!!!!im now officialy giving up on m7y rude and critic like reviews for hugguble ones! unless the fics are really really crapy. but u dont have to worry about that because this story rocks! rin_sama1989@yahoo.com
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