| "Will you be mine?" Reviews/Comments [ 230 ] |
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Reviewed By: Fluffy's mate On: March 02, 2004 19:56 CST
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update now
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Reviewed By: little rin On: February 29, 2004 23:43 CST
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Sesshy is coming!!! Not Sesshy/Kagome, please? Kagome needs her huggable hanyou.
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Reviewed By: firedemon86(not signed on) On: February 29, 2004 11:40 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey great story just started reading it. But why if Inu-Yasha has noble blood doesn't he say so then he and Kagome can be together? Oh don't leave me hanging here PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Reviewed By: haruka_tsuki_kou [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2004 00:43 CST
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You have to let me and the others in my mind know who it is!! We needs to know!! Is it our precious? Our precious Sesshy-chan?? Please, we wants you to go on!!!
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Reviewed By: Kaye [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2004 22:57 CST
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I know! It's Sesshy! Hehe, and if you wanted to know I think you spell bearer like so. Good chapter, I can't wait to see more. Please update!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2004 22:35 CST
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I really hope you were kiding with review demand. You should be happy with the reviews you get, because some readers are very picky and won't read anything that isn't as close to perfect as you can get it, and they will not excuse those spelling and grammar mistakes. Trust me I got a review from one very rude one once. And you should never be so disperate that you would actually except flames, because if they don't like the story then nobody made them read it! and nobody has the right to be rude to you. And if it makes you feel any better I put your story on my Author reviews, so every one who reads my story will know about yours, it's still their choice to read it or not. Now be nice and update!!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 22:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story and hope you update soon. The spelling and grammer isn't big, you can fix lost of them just by going back after you've finished writing a chapter and giving it a re-read, just imagine yourself as another person whos reading your stoy for he first time. Trust me it works!!
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Reviewed By: Kaye [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 17:02 CST
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Awesome story! It's kinda confusing, I was wondering why he acted so cold when he transformed and yet was obviously head over heels in love with her when he was human but then I got it. I thought he had forgotten, like he was two different people. But he's actually a prince. I can't wait until he gets his secret out, I just wanna see the look on Kagome's face when she finds out she turned the man she loved away. Good story, I really want to see where this goes! And please don't let Naraku touch her!
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Reviewed By: Princess of Bordom [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 16:24 CST
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Ir's really good keep it up. It's very intresting. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: little Rin On: February 23, 2004 09:16 CST
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Kawaii!!! I want a huggable Inu-demon or inu-hanyou too!
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Title: Wow!!
Reviewed By: Aewi (not login) On: February 23, 2004 07:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love this story. And I'm a big fan of Inu/Kag! It's getting more interesting. Please update soon! :)
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Reviewed By: hanamaru285 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 02:25 CST
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hey!!!!!!!!!!! kewl story!! please continue sooon!
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Reviewed By: ME On: February 22, 2004 21:08 CST
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Great start!! so, does Inu turn hanyou on a new moon?? Inu and Kag are so sweet together--should be interesting--update soon!!!
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Title: lala
Reviewed By: GRAVY On: February 22, 2004 21:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi how r u i am fine but u didnt ask me how i am did u thats rude gggggggrrrrrrrrrrr o welll i think that it is a great fic but what happens at the ball? do inuyasha and kagome get together? will u even write another chapther? ok thats all for now i really hope u write more i need a hug do u need a hug i know someone name crystal at my school and ur ending thing sounds just like what she would say how ocward byebye ttyl ILOVEME
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Reviewed By: Little Rin On: February 22, 2004 18:21 CST
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So sweet!!!!! More please?
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