| "Eien Ni Nakunatta Shunkan: A Moment Lost Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 268 ] |
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Reviewed By: kornychic [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 00:03 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh man! awesome chapter! i really think kohaku is going to go under narakus spell again, as i see you hinting at that lol. yep yep update soon!! CHEERS
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: Rayjayiscrazy nli On: July 07, 2004 08:50 CDT
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I love this story so much even if it is out of wack with the manga and anime storyline! It's wonderful and Sesshomaru is so in character and hot... Awww... Rin is so cute-ah! luv RayJay
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 02:56 CDT
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Great as always^^plz update soon!
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 00:39 CDT
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something bad is about to go down(run hides under the bed with a iron baseball bat with a sign that say I'm not coming put till I know what it is going to happen) anyway this is my all time great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: lynx9 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 13:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YaY. FOr joy and happiness.I loved it all. I wonder if that's your firstlemon, it was pretty good, really good. Congrats on your nomination. And get those updates out, ASAP
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Reviewed By: Mica On: July 06, 2004 09:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finally could read the complet version! And I loved it. You were great! I ask what will happen now between them...
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: kornychic [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ive read all the chapters, and im so amazed! what a great story! i loved it and you must update soon!! please!! aaaamazing! i love the whole great plot and i really loved how you made totosai so in character and funny, and jaken too. you are a great fic writer! CHEERS
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Reviewed By: nonschool On: June 28, 2004 07:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful chapter.Sesshoumaru always so spoiled,but Rin gets what she wants in the end and Sess's 'plan' will fail.*Because he loves her! He loves her so much! His pride will fall. (*little tribute take on a fav. line )
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Reviewed By: bad kittie On: June 19, 2004 14:32 CDT
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I read both versions of your latest chapter, and I think it is a shame that FF.net censors. The PG-13 version is more distant from the characters than the "adult" version. Something was missing for me in that versions after it started off some intimate and with all that sexual tension. The unedited version connected the story better and you were left feeling like a vouyeur who'd just had the curtains drawn. Great job! The view into Sesshoumaru's "issues" about siring a hanyou was an excellent touch, plus the fact he can't express to her verbally his love. Boy is he in for it. Can't wait!
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 20:03 CDT
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Great plz update soon!!^_^
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Reviewed By: Mikky_that_forgot_pasword On: June 16, 2004 13:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again... amazing... I wanted the whole piece, that's why I came here. Even being a lemon it was a really tender one... Next to some lemons around, I would take this as a lime... It isn't a hard-core f@#$ing, its love... Omedetou it's amazing.
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Title: Chapter 17
Reviewed By: theMaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 22:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You did deliver the goods ^__^ Bravo! But, poor Rin. And I thought I was naive at that age. As for the issue of offspring . . . when has Sess ever been able to say "no" to Rin? She's a resourceful girl. She'll get him to change his mind one way or the other . . . hehe.
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 19:27 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update that was a great lemon
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Reviewed By: Nema On: June 14, 2004 17:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's hard to believe that this chapter is your first attempt at an actual lemon as it was done amazingly well. So don't knock yourself as you are a heck of a lot better than a lot of the fan fic writers out there. Again, a great addition to an already wonderful story.
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Reviewed By: *speechless* [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 01:14 CDT
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eh *wimpers* your evil... *starts to cry* but also wonderful...I love your fanfic so far! Please update soon! And I really am glad that theMaven mentioned yourfan in one of her stories or I probably wouldn't have found yours ever or for a while. p.s. thanks a bunch for all the new japanese vocab! haven't learned any new words or phrases in a while. *goes back to crying while waiting for more chapters*
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