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Reviewed By: sayin_girl On: March 12, 2004 16:17 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You just made my day! I loved the thing with Sango Ha! He deserved that. And Kagome going home and giving him a taste of what life would be like without them was a good touch, 'Don't know what you've got until it's gone' kinda thing. Unfortunatly he still is having Kikyo issue's but I guess I can't ask for too much from the loveable idiot. *sigh* I really wish that he would understand, He already knows what he wants, and everybody is practically beating it into his head(He He.... Sango) I can't wait to read more! I love this fic sooo much! please write more soon, I am drooling in anticipation.
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 08:46 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to tell you that was one of the most amazing chapters I have ever read. There was so much passion and emotion I was totally lost in it. The whole thing was so well written and the love scene was done with taste and style. Not many writers can pull that off, it was truely beautiful. I just wanted you to know I was really floored by the whole story so far. I hope you contiune to update as soon as possible because this has quickly become one of my favorites.
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Reviewed By: Piper On: March 10, 2004 14:45 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KAWAIIIIIIIII! This the bestest fic EVA! Its funny and cute and perfect! *passes out* please update asap!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2004 02:17 PST
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that chapter was so cute and so nice and so happy... up untill the very end, when it became very sad. i keep wondering to myself if i have a right to hate kikyo, it's nt like she asked to be undead. but still. i wish she would go away. *sigh* i still loved that chapter. so sweet. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: ady anhee 999 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 20:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tens all around. This is a wonderful story. One of the best I have read. (and I have read oh, so many) I am truly interested to see how this will play out now that Inuyasha is hit with reality of what the future holds. I myself am not the biggest fan of Kikyou, but not a 'let's kill Kikyou' type. (or as one person once told me... time to shatter the clay doll!) Oh... I wonder if Sessy (aka fluffy :P) is going to be drawn into this one. Would be intersting... not to meantion.. ACK! WHAT WILL KOUGA THINK! Well, anyways, love the story. And I can't wait for the next chapter. TTFN! £ady ßan§hee 999
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Title: no spaces in name sorry i can't log in!
Reviewed By: inuyasha _ obsession On: March 09, 2004 17:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY FREAKING GOD!!! YOU DO NOT KNOW JUST HOW AWESOME THIS STORY IS!!! I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT... IF THERE WAS 100 I WOULD GIVE YOU 100 BUT THERE ISN'T SOO... PLEASE CONTINUE SOON I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH THAT I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! I DIE A LITTLE EACH DAY YOU DO NOT UPDATE!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! P.S. I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!! AND I 'CAPS LOCK' IS NOT AN ACCIDENT! (CAPITAL LETTERS) AWESOME
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: kagomi On: March 09, 2004 15:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice chapter loved it and may i ask u a qeustion : why is it u r logged in until u try to review something
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Reviewed By: Del_kaidin(NLI) On: March 09, 2004 11:50 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderfully sweet lemon. I hope you figure a way for them to be together by the end of the fic. Hmmm... with Yukio looking like Inuyasha and Kag nursing him.... is Kikyou going to do something petty and vindictive? Cause Inuyasha to choose between his son and her? If she is bad move Kikyou.... oh well... guess I'll just have to wait and see... back to wait mode
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Reviewed By: sayin_girl On: March 09, 2004 11:12 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, that ending was a little depressing. I think Inu needs to have a long talk with himself and decide just what he's gonna do, and what he wants out of life. Hope he comes to a decision soon. I don't hate Kikyo per se, I'm just not very fond of her, and considering that there's enough Kikyo angst in the anime and manga to drown myself in, I hope that he don't spend to much time dwelling on it. Well, other than the ending that made me feel bad for them both I think it was an exceptional chapter as always and wait anxiously for the next. please don't leave me hanging for too long. ^_^
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Reviewed By: caliko - not signedin On: March 09, 2004 10:35 PST
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**Sob** hit with a dose of reality... how sad! Something MUST BE DONE to the clay pot.. ***Evil thoughts***
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Reviewed By: Faye273(NLI) On: March 09, 2004 09:11 PST
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Yay, new chappie! ^_^ I'm glad that someone out there finally remembered that IY has another promise to fulfill and that he can't just walk away from it. Though it does present somewhat of a problem *sigh*
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Reviewed By: shawana-sama On: March 08, 2004 07:44 PST
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I just want to praise you again. I can tell by your story that you are up to date on the plots that occur in the orginal work (and i am guessing you read the manga :)). I am glad to see someone write a story that is a plausible continuation.
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Reviewed By: shawana-sama On: March 07, 2004 19:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful wonderful! I have been following your story and can not read in the shadows any longer. Your story merits a plethora of positive reviews. I love the insights into the characters, especially inuyasha. The story seems well thought out and is very tasteful. Thank you so much for your contribution to the world of inuyasha fanfiction.
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Reviewed By: Scathach [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2004 16:29 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That doctor's probably halfway to Siberia by now...that'll learn her. Your writing continues to be excellent, and the end was just too touching. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Sharpieg On: March 06, 2004 14:38 PST
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Love it!!!!! I don't know what else to say... but you definetly keep me coming back for more, so I hope this isn't the end! I love how Inuyasha has seemed to grow without losing too much of himself in this story, and how you show the realities of parenting. I can't wait for more! hehe
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