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| "The Lucky Ones" Reviews/Comments [ 1108 ] | | Pages (74): [ « ‹ 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 › » ] | Reviewed By: Kisamadesu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 14:17 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The second chapter was short but really interesting. The way Inuyasha got all worried about the child and how he knew what to do with the infant was really touching and very thoughfull (spelling?) of you. I'm glad I won't have to wait to see how you're going to work on Inuyasha's behavior towards the baby ^^
| Reviewed By: Kisamadesu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 14:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello! I've seen comments about this story everywhere, in my mailing list, in Deviant Art, in Green Tea's Forun...All great comments, and I am always after a good story. So I really regreat not coming sooner to read your fic, because it seems really cute by the first chapter. Well, better be late than never coming to read, uh?
| Reviewed By: silver_demon_angel On: October 02, 2004 00:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is my all-time favorite fanfic. i just could not forget this story, it's like watching a movie played out in your mind! BRAVO! BRAVO! ENCORE! i say you made a miraclulous story full of emotion and devotion. in the end i'm very greatful you didn't show their deaths, even though i finished this story i will keep writing you reviews! bye and great job!
| Reviewed By: Anime_gurl1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 11:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love your writing, I haven't quite finished the story yet and I don't expect to for quite a few days. I just got done reading your little chapter on why Inuyasha is acting the way he is, and I think that you are right. I hate how some authors make Inuyasha seem like a heartless, supid basard when he does have a nice, gentle, caring, side he shows often to Kagome. I think you've caught his character just right and not that many people can do it. I really love your work and hope you will continue such things like it in the future. Kyra ps. You were right about the story, it's only rated R and shouldn't have been deleted from fanfiction, but there is nothing you can really do about it.....
| Title: wow... just. WOW
Reviewed By: Neoscottie On: September 24, 2004 09:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has to be, by far, the BEST Inuyasha fic I have EVER read. It's written so well that you experience the emotions right along with the characters! I was so sad when I got to the last chapter. I swear you should publish this. It would make millions! Keep it up, and I hope to read more of your work! :)
| Reviewed By: Miko no Tears and Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 15:08 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello again, i just wanted to express my gratitude for the fact that you have written a fantastic story and shared it with every one. teh emotions that one experiences with it are factastically extracted and i couldnt imagine not reading it. thank you again, and i cant wait to see if you have more stories to be read!
| Title: Epilogue
Reviewed By: Dragon's Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 11:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was beautiful. You're awesome, you know. I've been praised before for my fic, but in all honesty, I'm a negative 10 compared to your fic. I'm so so so SO glad that I found this fic and got the chance to read it. Truthfully, Kagome's wrong. I'm the Lucky One for getting the opportunity to read this. Someone ought to make it into a book or manga. That would be the only thing left to do to make it perfect. That, or make it into a movie. How perfect would that be? Plus, you gave me a lot of bright ideas I never would have thought of on my own. I take that back. I'd think of them after I finished my own fic. So really, your ideas definitely started pointing my head in the right direction. Next chapter I update with is going to add in the comment of your fic, because this one absolutely HAS to be passed around and renowned. (Rhyme unintentional) I'm watching you, Terri. Make us all proud with a sequel, will ya? See ya!
| Reviewed By: moonstruckmaiden On: September 20, 2004 15:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, how beautiful! i really loved this story, thank you so much for sharing it. i must say that the second half of the story was much better then the first, i felt that in the last 20 chapters (or whenever the well sealed) your writing style dramaticaly improved. not that i didn't enjoy the entire story, because i did, but WOW, the entire ending was nothing what i expected, and i am really grateful that you continued on when i thought you were finished. the best thing about this story is that you really feel like you know the characters, and you really care about them. this even applys to the ones that you created, most fan fiction authors can't do that, but you pulled it off gracefully. i felt that these extra characters had always been a part of the inuyasha world, and now when i watch inuyasha, i find myself looking for them! good job, i look forward to reading more of you stories soon.
| Reviewed By: moonstruckmaiden On: September 20, 2004 14:57 PDT
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| Reviewed By: Myriadragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 12:54 PDT
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hee hee... I like all the names from other series.
| Reviewed By: Myriadragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 12:30 PDT
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hmm *strokes beard* wait I'm a girl...feh, never mind...this looks interesting. I lost it at the image of Kagome trying to coax Inu out of the God Tree on their wedding night...that's kinda the reverse of what most people write, so it really stood out--and it was hilarious!! I know this story is over and done with but I found it and now I am going to read it. You can't stop me. Muahaha...
| Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 15:29 PDT
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I celebrate my return to connectedness by reviewing the epilogue. I retch at ff.net's hypocrisy! (Ptui! Ptui!) ~ ~ ~ Technical note: In prose, numerals that take two words or fewer to write out should be written as words, not numerals. (Three, four fifths, seventeen, four million, fifty eight, 127, 5009, 3.0, 450) ~ ~ ~ "Clarkson's" should be "Clarksons" ~ ~ ~ I would have liked more of a description of what Ian looks like. We have so many great visuals of baby Yukio with his white hair and puppy ears. What does a one-quarter Inuyoukai look like? ~ ~ ~ "until Yukio had tried it with Miaka, no one knew a hanyou could extend the life of a mate through the ritual blood sharing performed by full youkai." This doesn't make much sense. Do you mean that a full youkai shared blood with Miaka on Yukio's behalf or that Yukio and Miaka imitated a full-youkai "marriage" ceremony and accidently found out that it prolonged her life? ~ ~ ~ Excellent tie-in with the title. This is one fitting epilogue.
| Title: Chapter 20
Reviewed By: Miko no Tears and Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 14:59 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i realize there is so much more out there then the eps on Cartoon Network, though i have been unable to access them so far. i just wanted to say that i love how you have written Inu yasha, i do believe you have made his character grow the way he would with Kagome around. and as each person has their own perspective on characters, i think it is dumb of others to claim your Inu yasha is out of character. Im Loving this fic so far and cant wait to continue reading it.
| Title: Chapter 50
Reviewed By: dArK_pSyBoRg18 (2 lazy 2 log in) On: September 17, 2004 01:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say... that was by far the best Inuyasha/Kagome fiction I have ever read. It's been an honor to read this fanfic. I hope many will come after. Great job! L8er. -Tiffany M.
| Reviewed By: Miko no Tears and Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2004 15:31 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is fantaistic! im only about to begin chapter 10 and i have to be away froim the computer for a while asn di dont want to leave! i want to stay and finish the story! its heartwrenching in the best kind of way and realistic as well, i can see something like that situation occuring! well get back to you after i finish the story but it is great so far!
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