| "The Lucky Ones" Reviews/Comments [ 1108 ] |
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Title: heh...heh, sorry...
Reviewed By: Forlorn Essence [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 15:20 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is REALLY good, but could u maybe consider putting some of the Japanese translations into english. Thnx, LUV UR FF!!! Update soon!!
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Title: Request....
Reviewed By: Forlorn Essence [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 15:18 PDT
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Reviewed By: rommel17 not signed in On: July 26, 2004 15:00 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I assume you have Rumiko Takahashi's permission to do such a venture. Well this story seems about ready to wrap up, so I await the epilogue to this. Till then Semper Fidelis.
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 14:49 PDT
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Great chapter. Love the story. Keep up the excellente work.
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 14:37 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!hope you update soon^^
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Reviewed By: sharpieg On: July 26, 2004 14:30 PDT
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I am so buying a copy of that book the minute its released! I am a huge fan of Kristin's artwork, and of course of your story, so it'll definetly be something I treasure. Now.. about this chapter.. it was incredible! And, I was laughing hysterically because of the image of Inuyasha holding the sword, looking all mean-like, with a baby sling. Thanks for bringing a smile to my day.. hehe I know we've gotta be getting close to the end, so I've been enjoying every last little bit of this story. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 14:28 PDT
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Another very good chapter--I have to admit I was getting teary-eyed reading the scene where the dear departed visit Inuyasha while he's on the threshold between life and death. And the image of Inuyasha in fire-rath clothing, sword brandished, and baby sling on back was just too, too precious. As always, great job!
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Reviewed By: buffy7854 On: July 26, 2004 13:14 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter! i would love to buy a copy of your story! i hope you get it done soon. cant wait to see how it ends!
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Reviewed By: Lucille Hannah [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 08:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely brilliant! I love the part in the garage where Yukio is teaching Miroku to service his POS English car! Anyways I'm just dropping a line to tell you that your story is great and I hope you update soon and let your fans know what happens with Inu Yasha and Kagome! ~LH~ By the way I found your story because of Kristin's web page/pictures!
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Reviewed By: jammies2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 00:47 PDT
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Hi I just wanted to say I really like this story it is great. I have one pet peeve and I know you have written 40+ chapters.... but Inuyasha's sword is spelled "Tetsusaiga" not 'Tessaiga' I know it is just a little thing but it *for me anyway* irks me. Plus with Sessy's sword 'Tenseiga' (that is spelled ok) in the mix right now I was kind of getting them mixed up they are almost spelled the same in the last chapter. I am not going to stop reading and this is not meant to be a flame I mean no offense I really love this story and always look for updates. I wish I could write a story as good a this one but my little 'scrathings' posted at ff.net and other sites don't compare to this. Keep writing I look forward to reading more.
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Title: fantabulous
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 21:15 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
way to put a girls emotions threw the ringer, I'm still not entirely sure of where its going to go from here. You might crush my fragile heart still. It would be very japanese if you did, send them to there eternal rest that is. I'll be watching out for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Scoob_Dog_03 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 20:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep up the good work. I have been following this fanfic for about 3 months now an I can't get enough. Please update soon I want/need to know what happens to Kag and IY. I'll very sad when this story is over I just love the way you've developed the characters and plot. Just if you would after this fanfic is done could you do one thats about Yukio. About his wife and how things went from there, or maybe something about the new pup if this one won't cover it. Please don't ever stop writing because so far i like what i read and you are very talented.
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Reviewed By: fiochan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 15:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm, I've actually been through that, producing milk I mean. When I was 12 my sister had her first baby and I for some reason started lactating. Never had her suckle me though, it just happened... er... *slightly embarrassed* Anyway, love this fic! *runs off to read the rest and hide from stares*
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Reviewed By: Ms. Smith On: July 23, 2004 22:04 PDT
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What else can I say besides WOW! This fic has continued to top all my expectations. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Please let IY, Kagome, and the baby live!
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Title: Holy Update, Bottaman
Reviewed By: tinkerbell [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 10:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been faithfully following this story for months now and each chapter you never cease to amaze me. I love the way you've developed all the characters. The only thing I hate is that this story will have to come to an end one day. Please promise that when it is over, that you'll write another InuYasha story, (maybe focusing around Yukio). I want that promise in writing.
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