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Reviewed By: Geshron Tyler [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 16:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter has been a long time coming, and I've enjoyed reading every word, from the 1st chapter to the latest. ^_^ I am wondering if you won't be laying a twist on things before the end (I was worried somewhat by Yukio's certainty at the end of chapter 35 that the day was going to be wonderful- that's usually a sign of disaster to come. ^_^ I expect "Uncle" and "Aunt Rin" will still be making an appearance- I certainly look forward to that. I really enjoyed the chapter in which Inuyasha went to his brother's aid after the rebellion in the Western Lands. I'm not sure if you mentioned planning a sequel or not (and haven't the time right now to check prior author note's). If you are, I must I await eagerly. These last two chapters have been wonderful, and I also loved reading the account of the Fushikenwa's history from the sealing of the well to the "present" day. What's to say, but "more!" ^_^ Thiemo
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Reviewed By: Rommel17 not signed in On: June 03, 2004 15:18 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I say this building to a nice conclusion. Will there be a sequel??????
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 14:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. You know, this is seriously one of the best peices of fiction I've ever read. I can't wait untill you update again!
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Title: another wonderful chapter!
Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 14:38 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, it looks like the story is winding down--this chapter definitely had the feel of a wrap-up, without any pending jeopardies or unresolved conflicts. But it was so much fun to spend time with Inuyasha and Kagome's family, and to see them interact with Mama Higurashi, Souta, and Gramps. You do dialogue so well, really capturing the verbal rhythm of siblings and parents/children. I kept chuckling at the various little gems...thanks for updating so quickly. I've been enjoying this story so much!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 23:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I took me a while but I'm done reading your story. And I have to say it is amazing and flawless!!!! There are just no words to discribe how much I loved reading it and can't wait for the next update. It's not that often that I give perfect 10's but your story deserved it. It was so well written and put together and even though the lemons weren't completely detailed they were still perfect. I had an idea to write a story about how Inuyasha and Kagome find a baby and take care of it, but after your story forget it. There is no way mine would be as good as yours. You are an amazing writer and I hope you write many more stories for me to get hooked on. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Ms Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 08:57 PDT
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wow. I just am so impressed at how you have made the transition through time. Nice work. Oh, I can't wait for Inuyasha and Kagome to get there!Please update soon!! And thanks so much for sharing your wonderful writing abilities with all of your readers.
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Reviewed By: Knifeblade nails On: June 01, 2004 17:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice fic i don't think that the ratings need to be explained at all write more very soon please!
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Reviewed By: Mockingbirdflyaway On: May 31, 2004 21:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found this fic through Kristen Bergh's web site a long time ago and have been following it ever since. This is an amazing story! Waiting for each update is nearly torture. That saying "Finishing a good book is like saying goodbye to an old friend" rings true for this story. -Mockingbird
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Reviewed By: kay (kay c ) On: May 30, 2004 15:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just to tell you Im realy kay.c but im not loged in. any way i love your story it is one of the best i have read. Good job.
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Reviewed By: kay (kay c ) On: May 30, 2004 15:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just to tell you Im realy kay.c but im not loged in. any way i love your story it is one of the best i have read. Good job
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Reviewed By: Patsyglue123 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2004 14:49 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay another chapter!!! ha this one is soo cute...congrats can't wait until the next!!
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Reviewed By: darkempereror [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 14:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I looked at the front page of your reveiws, and realized, I wasn't there anymore! I don't know how you managed it but you managed to extend the fic. Wish i could do that with mine, but I guess you have to leave yourself the oppurtunities. If this is your first fic ever, I must say that you have an amazing talent and should start writing part time. Your own books would be amazing, and I'm sure that anybody who reads them would instantly admire your work. This fic is amazing, and if it ends anytime soon, I want the next fic to follow quickly and surely in The Lucky Ones great foot steps. if this isn't your first fic, I still say you have amazing talent and should start writing part time. But not until you finish The Lucky Ones. Update, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please!
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Title: The Lucky Ones
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 14:09 PDT
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Well, I had been wondering how you were going to handle the 500 (give or take 50) years between the past and present, and I have to say that I LOVE the way you did it. My hat's off to you, and your muse. If I could figure out how to work the internet the way kids do, I nominate you and your story for extra-ordinary talant, style, sense of humor, and flair. This story will be wrapped up very soon, and I will miss waiting with bated breath for the next update. Maybe you have something new for us. Even if you don't, this story gets the highest marks from me. Love it, love you for coming up with it, love your muse for making you write it. Thank you. If I could remember how to spell it, I'd say it in Jananise (I know I spelled that wrong, but I think you get the point.
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 03:56 PDT
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aaii!! i can't wait! reading about Yukio's excitement has gotten me all excited. will we get another intro to all the kids? i think i might go back and read over them again. 26 is a big number. i wonder how Kagome and Inuyasha kept them all strait. O.o nehoo. i can't wait to read more! up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 19:25 PDT
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this ai a great fanfic please update soon
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