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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 07:58 CST
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I love the happy ending! Wonderful! I liked all the writing, but the happy one was the best! :D
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Title: Miss You
Reviewed By: Kirei [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 07:43 CST
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The happy one was pretty funyy...and to be quiet honest and scary I like the third chapter better I think. I guess I just like someting that is written well enough to make me cry. Anyways great work on the ficcy! Loved all of it!!!
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 15:02 CST
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I like them too, but this one is affecting me more then most. I just need to see the happy one!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 21:07 CST
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*sighs & wipes away more tears* I think that I might like the sad ending better than the happy ending. u might think that's weird, but somehow I like it when Bakura (or Ryou) commits suicide and then the other one kills himself to be w/ him in the afterlife. Anyway, I really liked the chappie, and I hope u'll update soon.
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 21:18 CST
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You have to put up the happy one! You have to *shows authoress tear filled eyes*
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Title: SAD!!!`
Reviewed By: HotsummerYami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 19:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ryo's love died!!!! Bad ending!!!!!!!CHANGE IT!!!!! Can't wait for the next ending! You better write it! Or else, Ill have to go insane!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kirei [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 19:17 CST
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Awwww That was sooo sweet and soooo sad! I'm still crying!!!! Greath ficcy, Rikoh! I loved all of it! I can;t wait for the fourth chapter!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 16:36 CST
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*wipes away tears* Beautiful and very sad. I guess I like it so far. Please update soon, and I hope that Ryou tries to go back. A heart-broken Bakura makes me sad.
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Reviewed By: Kirei [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2004 15:22 CST
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I can't wait until you put up the other chapters!!! It's very good so far!
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 21:09 CST
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you know, normally when I read angsty fics, it doesn't faze me (I'm a dark person at heart) but you brought me to tears! You have to write a new chapter! You have to continue! I hope it turns out happy, it would break my heart if it didn't...
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Reviewed By: mystieka On: March 07, 2004 10:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*tears drip from herr sheeks* o...my...god. i have never feelen this muth pasion this muth love anger sniff *wips the tears from herr face* pleas write more (with funny little voce) pleas.
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Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2004 18:52 CST
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*gasp!!* You.. You can't leave it off at this!!! You have to continue the fic!! Maybe from Ryou's point of view, eh? So we can find out where he's been for the past few weeks, hm? Oh! I loved the flashback! That was my favorite part! Oh, please continue this! I hate sad ending, no da!
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Title: Thanks!
Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2004 18:37 CST
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Sorry, it's traditional for me to thank my first reviewer but MM wasn't loading on my pc for a while so i didn't have time to read it! Anyways, Selene-chan, thanks for being the first to review! I might put up a second chapter... I guess since 2 people are saying it and I was thinking the Ryou POV thing is a good idea... Thanks! I'll be sure to put up a new chappie about that soon for you! ^_~
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Title: Miss You
Reviewed By: Kirei On: February 29, 2004 16:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I said the same thing at school! There needs to be another chapter! I'm driving myself crazy because of how bad he feels! It was very well written though and I still loved it! Keep up the good writing and don't forget to continue When That Day Comes! I want to know what happens soooo badly!
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Reviewed By: Selene-chan On: February 28, 2004 01:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There is a 2nd chapter isn't?? **teary eyes** Please!! There must be!! You can't let Bakura stay like that!! Please! And I don't Ryou is coping much better.. **chibi eyes** A Ryou's POV would be nice **wink**wink** I really like your fic, quite original. I'm hoping for a happy ending =)
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