| "No Where To Run" Reviews/Comments [ 71 ] |
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Reviewed By: anime_fan141 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 00:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
as much as i love fluffy-chan inu-chan needs someone to get his sences back like they should and if he is too live i think he should do something for kagome nice to repay what he did to her dont know what but that is my opinion,(great story by the way i cant wait to see what happens)
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Title: Lady Raven
Reviewed By: Lady Raven [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2004 19:19 CST
Comment/Review:
bad:dies:alone: :P
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Reviewed By: bahboohas [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 12:55 CST
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I like the story and Inuyasha should get some serious sense knocked into him by sess. and he shouldn't die but be very seriously wounded and Kagome shouldn't feel pity for him. Thats how i feel by do as you wish its a good story
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Reviewed By: Bitch of the Highway Thieves [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 10:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It took me a minute to remember your fic, but then I did. Gomen, but you hadn't updated in a while. My fault, not yours. What the hell happened to my memory? Sheesh. Another good fic. Oh, and I 'strongly dislike' Inuyasha. Kill him, torture him, abuse him. I don't care. Or you could let him live so I can bitch at him over the screen if you'd like. Why is InuTaisho away from his sister? Midoiko's gonna kick his ass. Update soon, please!
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Reviewed By: Miko no Tears and Aya (not logged in) On: November 12, 2004 09:24 CST
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this is pretty good, it goes really fast. i think Inu Yasha should stay bad and Die, hence no mate. i just havent read many like that and i think you could do it.
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Reviewed By: inumiko_kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 08:20 CST
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i think inu-chan needs some sense knocked into his thick skull. let sessh-chan and inu-taisho smack him around a bit. i do want him to be a good puppy. i don't like evil inu-chan. and as a punishment for him being such a jerk, we need to let him suffer alone for a little while. let him find a different mate later. great writing, by the way. i love the story and i can't wait to read more soon! keep up the wonderful work!!!^_^
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_Daughter [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 19:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me likey my friend so please update soon also I vote evil inu/dead/and no mate cuz he evil!!
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Title: No Where To Run
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer On: November 03, 2004 19:45 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: obsess_inuyasha_fan On: October 26, 2004 04:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hey this is a really good story. I have read so many fanfics but i haven't read one like this story. So why haven't you updated this story; are you just having a writer's block. Hope not. But if you are can you please atleast try to finish this story sometime soon. I would like to see what happens.
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Reviewed By: kana [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 15:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story!!!!please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Bitch of the Highway Thieves [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2004 11:08 CDT
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Oh, one more thing (forgot to put it in the review last time), ignore those who insult you. That 'Bungaloo' idiot doesn't even write his/her own fics! They have absolutly no right to complain unless they can do better! Screw that bastard! Kepp up the good work, and ignore the flames.
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Reviewed By: Bitch of the Highway Thieves [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2004 11:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good fic. Update soon. Oh, and never apologize for any mistakes you make as an author. Every mistake you make pushes you a little further along on the road to becoming perfect ^_~! Besides, no one's perfect. Even still, UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: sexychicklet17*logged out* On: October 02, 2004 11:42 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
bungaloo is the pathetic one! the only reason he even has an account on this website was so he could review you! did you notic before he didnt have an account and then to back up what he said about no one on this page had an account. now THATS pathetic....but you know what? the real reason why im reviewing was to tell you that you did AWESOME and bungaloo is a DICK! plz keep writing good stories!
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Title: Nice story going on
Reviewed By: Bashoooshi On: September 29, 2004 02:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi I read lots of lemon stories but I'm not perv and I'm a girl....I love your stories even tho I don't understand some of it since you don't know lots of english..I understand you because my first language was japenese,korean then engliish so I'm not too worried about your spellings..I'm pretty sure that you'll learn lots of english by writing fanfics or stories and I belive that you don't have a computer so you went to PC to post your fanfics...Well if I'm wrong about something and made you upset or anything I'm sorry.
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Reviewed By: Saphir Kitsune Youkai Girl On: September 28, 2004 20:11 CDT
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You're doing great so far!!! Keep going like this and you'll definitely have a reader as long as your story is on! Just watch out for the spelling mistakes, 'kay? I won't review every chapter, God knows I'm too lazy for that, but I'll keep reading for sure!
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