| "Twilight's Gleam" Reviews/Comments [ 148 ] |
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Reviewed By: Black B. Kirin On: March 10, 2004 19:59 CST
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Ohhh... Raven, you're so nice. ^^ Grab a man (or gundam... whichever you prefer) whenever you can! You're already featured in the story sooooo... *nudge nudge* Go for it! Knock 'im dead! *socks the air* And I'm so pleased that there is going to me more to this arc. Heh, sorry! My bad. 500 years old, Litho is 500 years old... not 5,000. >_< Dude... bad number sense.
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Reviewed By: Raven haired saiyan On: March 10, 2004 19:04 CST
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Whoops! Sorry. Well, I kinda like to if there's going to be a double date, so I wouldn't have to feel nervous...but then again....I wouldn't want Black to feel down. *Goes in deep thought*
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Reviewed By: NeoYami (La laaa) On: March 10, 2004 18:21 CST
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no, no no! I asked if anyone WANTED to go on a date with Kane...and just cuz I'm almost done with THIS story, doesn't mean I'm done with the SERIES. ^^
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Reviewed By: Raven haired saiyan On: March 10, 2004 17:36 CST
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Eh, gomen ne Black. *Puts icepack on Black's head* You had to take all the words right out of my mouth in your review and I agree! The chapter's funny though I feel a little sorry for Zero-sama *blushes* heh, heh. So the dream WAS real or is it just me? It's weird that Litho is in fact 500 or 5,000 years old and still cute! ^^ I wonder if he's still mad at me? So there's 2 more chapters to go and the fic will be done! But I'm gonna miss it ;_; *looks over to find a passed out RW* Is there a doctor in the house? And Kane's having a date!?!
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Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2004 14:24 CST
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Your lucky, our teachers don't even let us read in school! @_@ Talk about wierd! There's only two more chapter's left?! X( ACK!!!! *slams head against monitor and breaks it* NOOOOOOOOO!! *passes out* X_____x
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Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2004 14:19 CST
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X( Why is everyone taking either the rape thing or the cut?! I need to start copywriting things...Anyways, were getting closer to fluff, and you are really sick in da' head. 9_9 Oh yeah, i heard a funny saying- "Women need men like fish need bicylces." I probablu didn't spell bicycles right but w/e. It's still funny.
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Reviewed By: Green Devil [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2004 09:25 CST
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Oh man, I couldn't stop laughing all through the begining of this chapter. LOL! It was just so funny the way they were talking about the... doggie... Lol! I'm gonna be thinking of that all day! XD! Yeah, the doggie does need a leash. Lol! Oooo, they're gonna live together on their own? Cool! Eep! I hope Zero doesn't give Baku the next four marks. That would completly ruin their relationship! -_- Those two poor love birds, or cat and dog. Lol! Um, yeah. Great fic! Only two more chapters to go you say? Well lets get going then! Write more soon! ^_^!
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Reviewed By: Black B. Kirin On: March 09, 2004 22:56 CST
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Dude! You cannot imagine how many times I have reread the last chapter. I am soooooooo happy that you updated again! Yes, yes, yes!! The title already had me laughing. Cats and Dogs? LOL! Yay! Litho's such a little rascal... a 5,000 year old rascal... but a cutie none-the-less. ^-^ Cherry power, huzzah! I wonder if they will have cherry trees at their new home? Probably, huh? I can't wait to find out where they live? Is it going to be in Neotopia? Or in another dimension? And what about Ark? Guess Baku loves Zero too much, eh? *nudge nudge* And the sex? *perverted laugh* eheheheheh... >:) I love this story so very much! It's really good at describing the two's relationship... and the vampire thing doesn't hurt either. ^-^ All in all, I'd call this story a success already! Three chapters left? What are we waiting for? Let's go! The whole "mark" saga... *shivers* Wow. That really had me going. And for the Kane dating thing... who's the lucky gal? *jealous looks everywhere*
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Reviewed By: Black B. Kirin On: March 09, 2004 22:09 CST
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*blinks rapidly* More teachers? UAGH! *jumps up and hits table* @_@ There goes my braincells... Well, I'm not so sure about my teacher's being worse. All I know, is that they don't even know what anime is. Heh. We can even read magna's at school as long as they don't realize they're comics! LOL.
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Reviewed By: Raven haired saiyan On: March 09, 2004 20:59 CST
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Oh, I don't mind B! *looks around* Looks like Mr. Mattews is getting the Chobits box set like he planned. Oh no, Mr. Schiller is here too! If you think seeing my teacher is bad wait until I see your teachers! I bet they're worse! What are we gonna do now?
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Reviewed By: Black B. Kirin On: March 09, 2004 19:06 CST
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*rubs head* Heh, okay. Thanks! *green money signs for pupils* Mwuahahaz! The A/N notes had me cracking up. Kane does indeed seem to be getting popular. ^-^ The story had me on the edge of my seat. I was already jumpy when Yami mentioned there would be a *tiny* lemon scene (WoohOOOOOOO!!) but when Zero started turning really demonic, well, that made tumble right off screaming "WTF!?" 0_0; I was so surprised! what on Earth gave Baku such a nightmare? ='_'= Hmmm... Well, me hopes you'll tell us later on... *continues to ponder before realizing Raven's tacking pictures* YAY! *poses and spots her teacher aid* T-t-teachers?? ACK! Look out, comming through! Make some room for me, please! *dives under table after Raven* Hi! ^-^ Hope you don't mind the intrusion... BTW Yami, you had me really worried when you said you wouldn't update this fic... Whew!
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Reviewed By: Raven haired saiyan On: March 09, 2004 18:58 CST
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Yeah,'Baku-mama' is kinda cute. After all Zero-sama is the one who's wearing pants in the family. *Snickers* What is Kane talking about anyway. Oh well, better take a few more pictures before leaving. *Takes pictures of Kane,Black,Yami,and (my teacher aid) Mr. Mattews* 0_0! Mr. Mattews is here!?! Oh yeah, the anime stuff. BETTER HIDE! *hides under the table*
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Reviewed By: Raven haired saiyan On: March 09, 2004 17:27 CST
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*Takes camera* Next time, ASK! I hate hitting people for no good reason. *snickers* You look funny when you're like that! HAHA! ^0^ *Takes picture then developes it before going on E-bay* NOW we can start the bidding! ^^ Don't worry Black, I'll give you half the credit since it's your idea! ^^
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Reviewed By: Green Devil [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 09:36 CST
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Oops! One thing I forgot to mention. I WUVED THE LEMON SCENES!! XD! So cool! ^_^!
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Reviewed By: Green Devil [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 09:34 CST
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Hmm. Important line in the dream? Well, I'm guessing what Zero said about the first mark thing. "This shall be the first mark." Yeah, that one. And what WAS Kane talkin 'bout. o_O Psycho. Lol! J/k, I wuv you Kane. Aww, Litho was snuggling with Baku. He's so cute! I just can't get enough of him! ^_______^ Wheee! And I'll get my next chap out as soon as I can. I have to get another fic's chapter on ff.net up first. Great fic! Write more soon! ^_^!
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