| "Twilight's Gleam" Reviews/Comments [ 148 ] |
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Reviewed By: Raven haired saiyan On: March 06, 2004 14:46 CST
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Aw, you're no fun! Fine I'll keep quiet. ((You have your fingers crossed.)) Shut up Steve,she doesn't have to know that. ((Well it's true.)) No it's not! ((Why is your nose twicthing?)) Look, just keep quiet, I'm doing a review here so _please_! Everyone's staring at me strangely. ((Well it's not everyday that you have an unordinary slingshot talking to you...)) Don't remind me. (( Hm, Baku is doing the same thing you did a few years ago. I think he's rub-*gets tossed*)) Stupid peice of junk never shuts up. Just because Baku was winning a video game doesn't mean he's cheating! ((At least he didn't get his controller pulled out!)) -_- As I was trying to say, the chapter was pretty funny!
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Reviewed By: Black B. Kirin On: March 06, 2004 14:04 CST
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Ouch! *rubs mouth* I think I lost my lips... bah, who needs them! *looks around* Who did that? Grr... okay, to the A/N! He's not a preggy? Drat. >_< See? I have ba-a-a-a-ad insight. Oh well. The Litho creature was cool. So was the fact that Cole is Anna's aunt! What a twist!! Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Green Devil [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2004 12:16 CST
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'So much for the referee.' Lol! I know, huh? My questions will be answered? Later?! Aw, man... Hmm. So THAT'S what a Litho creature is. I was wondering what it was. It's a super being?! Uh-oh. Wonder what's gonna happen now. Great fic! Write more soon! ^_^!
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Reviewed By: RW On: March 06, 2004 11:46 CST
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Wow, Captain NOT protecting Shute?! That's new. I'm in the middle of writing the fic when we trap people we like in a bubble (called Realm of CHAOS!! Good name, huh?) What ways would you drive Zero insane...? How can Baku even cheat at video games, other than buying a mannual? Wait, he could turn off the power...
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Reviewed By: Raven haired saiyan On: March 06, 2004 11:06 CST
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*Question mark appears* I do? Really Black? Why aren't you saying anything? And why are you wearing ducktape on your mouth, you look riddiculous with it on! *Rips the tape off...eh a little too hard* 0_0! *Quickly hides it* ^^; Eh, hope you didn't get it from my uncles car.
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Reviewed By: Raven haired saiyan On: March 06, 2004 10:57 CST
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0_0 Okay, I'm SLOWLY backing away from the Zero. I do NOT want to get hurt by him! Now I'm starting to wonder what _is_ going on. Man these guys are much worse than Spike and Dru! (From Buffy.) Mostly Dru! When will everyone find out about this?
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Reviewed By: RW On: March 06, 2004 10:38 CST
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That was...interesting...Yay, Baku had another attack!...I'm so cruel. I have a great ending planned for TB, and I'll probably b starting two more fics. *fist starts punching face* STUPID brain! What did I tell you about making more fics!! -.- One of them is when me and my friends take the people we like and trap them in white circular rooms!! Your probably going to b in one of them, with Zero cause I feel generous. If ya' want anyone else to be trapped, email me. Back to your fic, HE'S NOT PREGGIE! Er, hope not I mean. Hello, the sickness?! I know for a fact* that someone doesn't feel that way that short after um...sex. Yeah. *I have a very strange hobby of reading medical books. O.o I think I should order a new brain...
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Reviewed By: Black B. Kirin On: March 06, 2004 00:21 CST
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The baby might be a gunsoul-thing-a-ma-bobber! *shock* OHMIGOD!! Please Raven! Lend us your insight! You're the one whose good at predictions. *still in shock* 0_0 This is gonna be messy... or maybe not. I should just be quiet now... yeah, that's a good idea. *tapes mouth shut*
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Reviewed By: Black B. Kirin On: March 06, 2004 00:17 CST
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Oh um... *blinks* Sorry... overreaction. It just seems that way to me... Hey, I just realized something. Kane's pretty cool. ^^ He's seems like the model best friend. Okay, um, back to the story. HOLYBAGEEZUS HE'S- wait.. I've been through this, haven't I? *coughs* Eheh... erm. Yeah. Okay. That's so cool, Raven! And yes, you heard nothing. *shifty eyes* No-o-o-othing... hmm... very mysterious Zero. What did the effin' Kibaomaru do to him, now? >_< Thanks for the suspense Yami... just what I needed. :D J/K. You're an awesome writer. That's porlly why you thought you wrote so much. ^-^ Or maybe it's just my inexperience showing again... crap. :P Bleh, keep it up! I can't wait to see what's happening! Oh yes... PS to Green Devil: Your last day of school? DARN YOU! *jealous jealous* Nahh... congrats, you lucky dog, you.
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Reviewed By: Black B. Kirin On: March 06, 2004 00:11 CST
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HOLYBAGEEZUS, HE'S PREGNANT!!
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Reviewed By: Green Devil [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 23:47 CST
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En?! What happened to Baku? Was it his sickness? Was it something else? What was the little glowing thingie? Why'd it do that? What's going on? Will I ever stop asking questions? No... Ah crap, that wasn't a question... Um, anyway, great chapter! Wonder what happened to Zero. Poor guy. I hope Zero and Baku are both okay. Great fic! Write more soon! ^_^!
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Reviewed By: NeoYami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 21:13 CST
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uhhhhhh....new chapter up?
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Reviewed By: Raven haired saiyan On: March 05, 2004 17:26 CST
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*Crosses out an idea from the to do list* Darn, Shute you lucky son of a gun. *Pouts* I WANTED TO DO THAT! *mutters something about HIM and a crowbar* T_T Don't ask about what I said. It's bad enough that he's stealing my personal ideas to do when I'm bored out of my mind! First I act like Baku and Zero-sama, and NOW Shute's acting like ME! What's next? Me dressing up like my favorite male character!?! 0_0 Eh, forget what I said earlier back there. ^^; *Sigh* I guess I'll have to pay him $20.00 for that tape. Kuso. Can life get any WORSE? *Rain storm appears out of nowhere* -.-; Terrific. And I thought I was the only one blackmailing anime characters. If you need me I'll be getting weapons for torturing Kikumon. BTW, I don't think you need a lemon. I may be a yaoi-crazed fan but I think it's fine the way it is. Just don't want any flames hitting you in the prossess of someones wrath. Now what did I just say? o.O?
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Reviewed By: Raven haired saiyan On: March 05, 2004 11:50 CST
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Every once in a while Black. I don't know why or how but it's strange. And I think you aready said it out lo--I mean nope! I didn't hear a word from you, nothing at all! ^-^; Heh, heh. Speaking of Starbucks, I feel like I want a blended cappuccino right now. Since it's the only thing I drink from there, right next to ice coffe from Lee's sandwich compeny. (I think). But you DO sound like SOMEONE I know,but I just can't put my finger on it. Nice chatting with ya though. JA!
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Reviewed By: Green Devil [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 08:47 CST
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Oh my god! Kikumon is such a little bia bia! I can't believe her! She is not Baku's sister! She's too cruel! Not even I'd do something like that. And I thought I was evil... No! No one can be eviler than me! BWAHAHAHAHA! Um, great chapter! Maybe Baku WILL follow them one day, and maybe we'll know what or who that shadow really is... Yay! Today's my lasy day of school! Can't wait till it's over. Great fic! Write more soon! ^_^!
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