| "Taken" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
Title: this story is so good
Reviewed By: Mikkeyhodge1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story so much but please up date my email is mikkkeyhodge@hot.mail.com
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Reviewed By: eMeLyNoOoPeE [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 14:21 CDT
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that was very interesting... but now i am wondering what will happen... i wonder will she forgive him... but it's true he is a product of his world so doing something that is normally done shouldn't phase him... but i guess to kagome it would... i wonder if she will be bearing him a pup? well i hope that you can continue... sige na
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Title: Taken
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 13:32 CDT
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I have decided not to rate this fic (Not because I don't think it's worth rating) becuase I'm not sure how to rate it. It was very well done. Kagome's reaction of shock is perfect, so was the lack of fear. She has never had to fear Inu Yasha before, and she probably couldn't believe what was happening. Inu Yasha's reaction is also right on the mark. We need to remember that he isn't very old, and thinking before acting isn't his strongest point. The flea's reaction to the situation is probably the truest to his era out of all of them. In his eyes it was done with the honorable intention of making Kagome Inu Yasha's mate, so what was the problem. Like some of your readers, I, too, have been a victim of rape, but in my case, I was 6 at the time, and the man who raped me was never prosecuted. I have a some-what bad reaction to rapists, but was able to set that aside while reading this story. You have given us Kagome's recollection, Inu Yasha's POV, and Myoga's advice. Please allow yourself to finish this story, I am actually looking forward to how you intent to resolve this situation. Good luck and may your muse kiss you many times.
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 22:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
please update soon
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Reviewed By: stesnus(NLI) On: April 22, 2004 17:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the first time i read a story like this well i have STARTED ones before, but they were pretty disturbing. A lot of people want inuyasha POV don't they? Well i think it's fine the way it is, but it wouldn't be a bad thing if you did one. Well liked the story and hope you finish it...update soon('_')\/...
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Reviewed By: wj On: April 22, 2004 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue the story. It is very good.
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_For_Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 13:55 CDT
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Does Inu really bring it down so hard on himself? I mean rape is a terrible crime, but K agome wouldn't try to kill Inuyasha....would she? I am sure if she saw how much he despises himself for what he did, then she will forgive him, I mean how could she bring herself to hurt him when she knows he was protecting her from Kouga and she has loved him for the longest?
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Reviewed By: ......? On: March 26, 2004 18:33 CST
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I think you should include inu pov. I can't say i like it.. but i don't hate it. it's just... um well different. I think you caught the emotions of Kagome perfectly. I'll watch for an update if you do it.
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_For_Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2004 14:42 CST
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Cool, its not really a rape because everyone knows Kagome was enjoying it!!!^.^ But, I like how this is going so can you please update?!?!?!?!?!
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Reviewed By: wj On: February 29, 2004 18:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue the story.
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Reviewed By: Arianrhod GreenRose On: February 27, 2004 00:46 CST
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It's interesting, short but to the point. Sparse might be a good word. A few places seemed sort of jumbled, but it added to the feeling that she didn't really know what was going on until the end. I hope you do continue this. Maybe something from Inuyasha's point of view? or even Kouga's after he finds out about it...just some thoughts.
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Reviewed By: Lamilya On: February 25, 2004 21:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought you did very well writing this. I hope you write Inuyasha's point of view of the event, it would make it feel more complete. Thanks
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Reviewed By: Lami On: February 25, 2004 21:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought you did very well writing this. I hope you write Inuyasha's point of view of the event, it would make it feel more complete. Thanks
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Title: I and wondering why we have to write titles?
Reviewed By: InuYasha Loves Me...not loged in On: February 25, 2004 19:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i argee with kuarma'sgirl up there (sorry if spelled wrong^_^) but there is on thing that I would like to say if you contiune on with this story it would be nice if Kagome didn't go a wall on him and hate him...and you explain why the hell he did it...but it was well writen and was a niceish way to right a rape...and like Kurama'sGirl said...when I got raped it hurt like hell...but we can live with that...it was a long time ago anyway!...and he didn't get a chance to finish...I kicked him in the side and got him out of me before he got as far as to...well you know...guess i was lucky but love the story!!!!! well short thingie...
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Reviewed By: KuramasGirl (not logged in) On: February 25, 2004 19:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I loved this. I hate rape and shit like that, but this wasn't that disgusting, makes you puke rape. It was perfectly described from her point of view. I understand how it feels to be raped and you really got it without being raped. I mean, All I could seem to focus on after the 'event' was the pain in between my legs, then I recognized the pain on my wrists, where he tied my up. Just to let you know, I could barely keep myself up after it. My legs were flimsy and my lower body was burning so I couldn't walk even if my legs were working. Then, when I took a shower for the first time, even that was painful. It was like having an open cut and pouring Alcohol on it. But............ I am NOT flaming you! I think this is great, so don't think that I am. I would like you to finish it, but I understand that it was just an idea. ^___^
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