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| "Nigatsu no Hoshi (Stars of February)" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] | | Pages (5): [ « < 1 2 3 4 5 ] | Title: to kagome3007
Reviewed By: Miko no Suteki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 13:57 CST
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thanks for the reviews!!!! oh, about the japanese vocab thing. i was only using words that i know that they use in the show. but, im glad that you like the story!! =) and just to let everyone know, i have a new story up. its a short one-shot about the possible future of kag/inu
| Reviewed By: kagome3007 again On: March 16, 2004 09:23 CST
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=T-T= Kohaku! Iie! Kohaku! Poor Sango... =T-T=
| Title: chapter 6 review
Reviewed By: me again! (Kagome3007) On: March 16, 2004 08:50 CST
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Just think, InuYaha, if I'm getting this choked up over Kouga, think how emotional I'd get if you died! I'd obliterate the whole countryside! =^-^= Wait... That's not good... oh, well! ... ... ... uh... I keep seeing the image of someone's butt in my mind, so I think I'll take a break from the computer... oh, well! bai!!!!
| Title: chapter 5 review
Reviewed By: Kagome3007(not logged in) On: March 16, 2004 08:32 CST
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cool! =^-^= I like it! Just a few notes, not about the fanfic, but about your little... mini-plays before and after. more specifically, the entrance of Shizuka and the constant use of words that would not be allowed in good company. (plus one note about the chapter)~ 'Baka', 'urusai', 'kuso', 'chikusho', 'kakso', and any other swear words would NOT be accepted in everyday conversation in Japan. Just to let you know. You could use 'bakateme' (you idiot!) or 'bakayaro'(a formal use of baka).~ Hey! I have a character named Shizuka! I named her that before I knew it was really a word in Japanese. She's REALLY hyper, so I think it's pretty funny that I accidentally used the same joke that you on purpose made... yeah... I made her up a couple months ago, though, so I'm NOT a copy cat!(and she's not an InuYasha character)~ Plus! Poor InuYasha! He just wanted to confess his love for me! And that stupid Kouga! SHITA SHITA SHITA SHITA SHITA SHITA SHITA SHITA SHITA SHITA OTOKO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *Very loud thud followed by a string of quite vulgar curses is heard in the background* Saltairet: Serves you right, ya wimpy wolf! Not that I'm siding with Ototo-chan(InuYasha) or the human, but it does my heart good to see a cocky punk like you-- *landslide is heard in the background as a result of Kouga landing at the top of a mountain* --create a landslide with your body. Cam: Yay! Landslide! -slides on the rocks- InuKo: Wahoo! -joins Cam on the rocks- NekoKo: InuKo! Get down from there! You're gonna get hurt! Do I have to get the shovel? (j/k) GET DOWN!!! Kagome: -sigh- do you see what I have to put up with every day? Saltairet: WHAT DID YOU SAY, WENCH? Kagome: YOU CAN CALL ME BY MY NAME, YA KNOW!!!! KAMI!!!! I need a collar for Saltairet, too! Now that I think about it, I need a collar for ALL of them! All except Kagome: Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Title: Write more please
Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 03:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love how this is going.I can't wait until you write another chapter. I want to know whats going to happen to Sango,will they beat him,will InuYasha tell Kagome that he is in love with her. Please write more soooooooon.
| Reviewed By: vampirecircusgirl31 On: March 02, 2004 03:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so far...i like the story very much. keep up the good work..
| Reviewed By: Faye273 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2004 07:12 CST
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I like your fic very much, it's well written and I love that Kouga got a collar too. If I weren't fried from mid-term studying I'd write a better revew, but right now this is all I can manage, sorry.
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