| "This Is The Father I Always Wanted?" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 19:39 CST
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that was an awesome story so far. i can't wait until your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: AMANDA_TRINH On: March 11, 2004 15:05 CST
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WHOA!!THAT WAS GREAT AND ALL BUT THIS FICY WAS LIKE BASHING KAGOME WHICH WILL NOT DO!~!*STARTS MAKING A VOODOO DOLL OF KENTO AND STARTS PUTTING PINS IN IT,BURNING IT,FLUSHING IT IN THE TOILET,STICKING IT IN SHIT(CRAP),STARTS SHOTTING IT WITH A GUN!!CIA HERE EVERY1 FREEZE!!!WE'RE HERE 2 TAKE KENTO 2 PRISON!!!PLEASE MAKE THIS A INU/KAG FICY?!?!?!?!?AND PLEASE MAKE INUYASHA THE "KNIGHT-IN-SHINING-ARMOR"!!!WHO WAS THE DUDE THAT WAS @ THE PLACE WHERE KENTO & KAGOME MEET?!?!?!WAS IT SESSY OR WAS IT INU?!?!?!PLEASE MAKE THIS A INUYASHA/KAGOME PAIRING!!UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Reviewed By: blue moo On: March 11, 2004 09:41 CST
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You should give credit to Rozefire for the idea of this story. Because that was you inspiration and you can deny all you want. but all the people have to do is read her story Father Figure. You got your idea from that story. Right down to the parts where Grandpa disappears and the evil stepfather cops a feel on Kag's leg. It's damn near plagiarism. Real authors would ask for permission to do their take on someone else's story and give the other author credit for inspiring them. You are a thief
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: March 10, 2004 19:05 CST
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*pulls out gun like MIB* AAAAAAAAAAAHhhhhhhhhh! *blasting Kento* I have a HUGE personal HATRED against child abusers and male pigs. *pulls out throwing knives and aims at Kento* You WILL SERIOUSLY HURT HIM, RIGHT? *cough*Kill him*cough* Adios!
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Reviewed By: Minerva On: March 10, 2004 18:56 CST
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Wonderful! I am here to say great updated! ( Minerva thinking-Can not wait for Kento to get the beating he deserves. ^_^) Well, I do not want you to rush to update,buuut... I can not wait for you to update again!
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Reviewed By: Hanoi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 22:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
10! will you update now?
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Reviewed By: Hanoi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 22:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
9. Keep up the writin'
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Reviewed By: Hanoi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Here's 8, please update. Hey that rhymes!
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Reviewed By: Hanoi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the story is great so far, and I would like to see the direction you take it in
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Reviewed By: inu_obsessed_chic27 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 20:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've only read da 1st chappie, but u got it goin on! It's cool idea. I've only read a bit but dat bastard don't rememba his name deserve wats cumin 4 him. DAT bastard!!!! I'll update another time k? Coolie chappie!
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Reviewed By: Great Ficy On: March 04, 2004 12:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lov the ficy ! hmm i wonder wat is happing to granpa dude hmm well hope u update soon again cool ficy
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Reviewed By: Minerva On: March 03, 2004 19:33 CST
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Hello it is me again! I have decide to change my screen name to a better one. My old one was i will not give my name. It was too long. 0_0; Great new chapter though. Can not wait for an update. ( stares a other readers who do not review when they read good stories O.O) Bye!
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Reviewed By: Mizu Youkai On: March 03, 2004 14:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_o, wow, mediaminer has rating thingys? oh, wait, the review's on... I love this fic, please continue it! I hope you update soon...lots of chappies! ^^
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Reviewed By: Akane-chan On: March 03, 2004 10:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked your story and I'm looking foward to see the rest of your story!!! Please, update it as often as possible ^_^
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Reviewed By: i will not give my name On: February 26, 2004 21:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good story. I am sorry that your computer is giving you problems. I can not wait till her moms boyfriend gets what is coming to him. ^_^
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