Reviewed By: cyzay [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 04:42 CST
Comment/Review:
Well you did say it was a dabble - it wasnt bad, but, Itachi got a little unbelivable in personlity as the story went on - it just didnt work well in that aspect. i did like the idea of the secrete meeting at the hotsprings - maybe a little more development - if you wanted to take it alittle farther than a drabble - would make it into a entertaining full one-shot.
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