| "When That Day Comes" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Title: When That Day Comes
Reviewed By: Kirei [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2004 15:38 CST
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Yay! Chapter four was great! I'll try to update mine soon if people will review for it! And I'm working on two fics at the same time (do not try this at home)! I finished the one I told you about in school and I'm gonna post it later on!
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Reviewed By: Kirei [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 14:44 CST
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Yay! I read it the third chapter and I'm loving your fic even more! (if that's possible) The story lie is going so well and I hope that you don't get writer's block any time soon!
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Reviewed By: Kirei [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 17:41 CST
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Continue continue continue!! I know what you told me at scholl about continuing but you have to hurry!!! You know I can't handle suspense!!! Great story line!!! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Sakiyama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 15:16 CST
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OOhh yet another cool story ^^ now THIS is interesting! o.O but she woke up on the floor..how sad. This is suspenseful! You MUST MUST update!!
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Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2004 19:54 CST
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Oh, I'm interested! Please do continue! I wanna know what happens! Normally, I'm not al that interested in Mary Sue, but this /is/ intresting! And I wanna know! So, yes, please continue!
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Title: Thanks!
Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2004 18:40 CST
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As my tradition goes, I thank you as my first reviewer! Though I excpeted that since I had told you about it the day I put it up (yes, it is the one I told you about at the dance)... Oh well! Thanks for the review! I'm sorry but as soon as 2 other people review I will post the second chapter. I'm almost done typing it! See ya at school!
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Title: When That Day Comes
Reviewed By: Kirei On: February 28, 2004 12:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I could actually read it and understand it! Is this the one you were telling me about at the dance? I like it so far...please, please, please continue!
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