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Title: tessa
Reviewed By: tessa3 On: August 16, 2004 17:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For some odd reason i am reviewing here...lol...why i don't know anyways...that was freaking awesome...and as much as i have watched rave master i reconized the outfit man ...awesome awesome.. *pushes out of the way* HI SF-chan Kyo here...i Had to move the twerp out of the way ::gets hit in the head:: OW she's hitting me... anyways...i read this chapter too...lol...i like but i am going to have to go back and read it from teh beginning... ::muffles:: Idiot...anyways tessa here again... ever since we hooked up its has been disaster after disaster...its been great SF-chan... *blushes* i just hope i don't screw nothing up Oh also....hee hee... tell naraku if he keep son writing Marcus that way i am going to have to *clears throat* neuter him kyo: falls to floor @@ tessa: laughing evilly by SF-chan
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 02:14 EDT
Comment/Review:
love the story. keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 00:47 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think its about time Kagome realized that Marcus isn't the one. I loved the festival scenes. Hope Sesshoumaru keeps up this personality. Does he even know he did it?
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Reviewed By: IsisTheEgyptianGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 18:39 EDT
Comment/Review:
Srry, my cp accidently posted my review twice... ^-^'
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Reviewed By: IsisTheEgyptianGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 18:37 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Isis: Gah!! I love it! And Sesshou is sooo cute! *hugs Sesshou* ^_^ Sesshou: O.O What? Isis: I said, "You're cute." and Kagome is so lucky! Sesshou is 10 gazillion times better than Marcus! But, *sniff sniff* Poor Grandpa... You did say nothing would happen to him SF so that's o.k. But I'm still hung up on how nice and cool Sesshou was for Kagome! *sigh* She's so lucky... Inu: Hey Sesshoumaru? Are you blushing? Sesshou: >_< No! Inu: Riiight... Isis: I just love how you're portraying Sesshou-kun in this fic, he's so... normal and stuff. I love him!! He just rocks!! *hugs Sesshou again much to his suprise* Please update soon SF I can't wait!
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Reviewed By: IsisTheEgyptianGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 18:28 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Isis: Gah!! I love it! And Sesshou is sooo cute! *hugs Sesshou* ^_^ Sesshou: O.O What? Isis: I said, "You're cute." and Kagome is so lucky! Sesshou is 10 gazillion times better than Marcus! But, *sniff sniff* Poor Grandpa... You did say nothing would happen to him SF so that's o.k. But I'm still hung up on how nice and cool Sesshou was for Kagome! *sigh* She's so lucky... Inu: Hey Sesshoumaru? Are you blushing? Sesshou: >_< No! Inu: Riiight... Isis: I just love how you're portraying Sesshou-kun in this fic, he's so... normal and stuff. I love him!! He just rocks!! *hugs Sesshou again much to his suprise* Please update soon SF I can't wait!
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Reviewed By: kikitravel(I am a member of MM.org) On: August 14, 2004 17:30 EDT
Comment/Review:
Um... you realize that you put chapter 7 under chapter 8...
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Title: great
Reviewed By: Duchesscarml [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 02:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story! Can't wait for you to update (not that I can talk really... but I don't imagine that would stop me from saying this) PLEASE PLEASE update soon!! Me can't wait and i NEED to know what happened in the past with Sesshou's mom. And how did him and Inuyasha... umm get on speaking terms?? Can't really say 'become friends', hnm?? Anyway great chappie!! ~*Duchess
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Reviewed By: Medatsu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 23:59 EDT
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That fucking song!! Arg! SUCH BAD MEMEORIES! AND NOT THE WAY YOU THINK! I was 11 and i still didn't like boy too much and for my day camp end of summer show my counselor made me put on a dress and slow dance with a guy in front of an entire gym! Then he made me and the guy dance solo for a minute...ALL TO THAT SONG 'don't speak' by no dought..aww well... still liked it and will be waiting new chapters soon...
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Title: Loving It
Reviewed By: Conqueror_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 01:18 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I'm back! I must say I love this story just like all your others :D Though that part about Sesshy's mom was deeply depressing I almost cried, poor Sesshy. On another note I love your choices in song all of them are my favs :D. This boyfriend of Kag's give me a weird feeling should I be worried? Anyway you must update soon I wanna know what happens ok, later.
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Reviewed By: cutie_pie_2101_1012(2 lazy 2 sign in) On: May 29, 2004 13:00 EDT
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wats Marcus gonna do to kagome to make her hook up to sessho-kun
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Reviewed By: SilverFangedTiger [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 16:23 EDT
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JD: SF....YOU'RE GONNA DRIVE US ALL MAD!!!!!!!!!!! good lord, wednesday!!! ugh...i don't know if i can wait that long!!! please hurry! maybe even an early posting? Sessho: ::throws arms up:: now shes trying to con the bird. what next?
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Title: UpDaTe!!!
Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness (not logged in) On: May 28, 2004 00:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry about not reviewing in a while. Shame on me....*hangs head in shame* Ooh, this story is progressing very nicely. It gets more and more interesting as I read. Can't wait to find out what's going to happen next. Update soon, neh? Thank Ya! ~Psycho Demoness~(^..^)-meow
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Title: woohoo!
Reviewed By: paige50 (^_^) On: May 26, 2004 22:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm, i wonder wats up w/ marcus? and yeah im REALLY interested to see wat happens w/ sess/kag^_^ o.O and the pictures! i bet kagome will be in somethin skimpy, and will be posed in a possition involving sesshoumaru*_*
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Reviewed By: Lunabelle On: May 26, 2004 21:51 EDT
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Good chapter, but I'm confused. Is Rin Kagome's sister or not? Just wondering. Really like the song you have been picking in each chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter and what the picture will look like. Later.
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