| "The Breaking Point" Reviews/Comments [ 114 ] |
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Reviewed By: SilverFangedTiger [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 14:33 EDT
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JD: sssssssssfffffff! your killing me!!!! PLEASE POST!!! I WANNA SEE MARCUS GET HIS ASS BEAT BY SESSHO! sessho: as much as that little statement might be true, that time hasn't come yet, and who said it would happen? JD:well... THIS cannot be a kag/marcus and IF it is ::glares at SF:: which i know its not, then i'm gunna kill that falcon! {::all the sudden the movie screen pops up and a comparsion between JD and SF is put up::} JD: ::looks at comparision:: Ook...so the small fact that i'm a pup, shes full grown, shes like tall and i'm not even taller than shippo.... yea that might present a problem...so i won't kill the falcon... ::yells::CiCi! CiCi: ::comes in eating patatoe chips:: what'd i miss? JD: if SF doesn't post you gotta kill her for me! CiCi: ::looks around then down:: oh its you! No hon sorry no can do! JD: and why not?!! CiCi: cause i need her to finish second chance ::walks off to get more chips:: JD: screw you!...::looks around:: Ooo sessho!!!
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 11:26 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hellooo- I just wanted to tell you that I love your story! I was sooooo just really getting into it and then the chapters stop.. DAMNIT! I hate when that happens. Is Kagome limited to any kind of music? Because I can totally see her singing some of Christina Aguilera's songs-- anyway-- keep up the great work-- I'll be adding this to my favorites list so I cannot wait until next time.
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Title: check
Reviewed By: Striking Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 22:38 EDT
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Reviewed By: SilverFangedTiger [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 21:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
JD: ::mad at her self:: WILL SOME BODY PLEASE TELL ME WhY THE HELL I DIDN'T REVIEW BEFORE? Kagome: um... i don't know? JD: damnation! TWO FRIGGIN' cliffy's in ONE chapter! SF! how could you do that? Inu-chan: only feather ass could pull that off... JD: -__-' did i ask you? ::shakes head:: anyway! once in your regular chap then again in your author's note! that's BOOTY! Miroku: heh heh booty, hehe.. JD: 0.0... freak of nature. ::shakes head again:: ANY WAYS! WaIT A MINUTE! hold the phone! KAGOME is MOVEING in with MARCUS?!! WHAT THE HELL?? Oy Vey @_@. this inu pup is confuzzled. just what the hell- Sessho: ::sigh:: did you not read the author's note? JD: ::glares:: yea! Sessho: ::muttters:: such a child. then you would know that she said it was a stepping stone. JD: but how- kagome: in other words sessho comes to the rescue.. JD: Ooo Inu-Chan: ::fuming:: AGAIN! with the sesshomaru coming to kagome's rescue! that's me not him! JD: ::rolls eyes:: some body is jealous... Inu-Chan: I AM NOT! it's just... in almost all SF's fics sesshomaru is the good guy... JD: that's one of the many reasons i like her fics... sessho: ::grins:: thanks pup. JD: that wasn't a compliment to you, that was a compliment to SF. Sessho: -___-' JD: 0.0 uh oh
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Title: hello
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 21:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello again long time no talk... xp..... well anyways i just want to comment on your work... which is always postive ^^..... so you don't have to worry... but why do i have the feeling when kagome moves in with marcus it will be bad o.O.... not unless that is just me... >> ..... < ....... well hope to see you soon.... later ^^
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 17:51 EDT
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Decidedly interesting ^_^ Although I'm fairly sure I'm gonna have to go back and re-read the thing (my bad ... painkillers are sooo distracting). Um, why's it look like Kagome is getting setup to get "rescued" from the jerk? At least at this stage ^_~
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 06:11 EDT
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I love it, please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: 1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 03:11 EDT
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Reviewed By: a_r On: May 12, 2004 03:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man talk about a great set up. What a great story. Keep it up. -akuma_river
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Title: Whoopsie!
Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 20:19 EDT
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Woops. Darn computer made me post the review twice. Sorry about that!
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Title: UpDaTe!!!
Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 20:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
~PD:Hehe...I just realized I hadn't reviewed in a while. My bad. I loved the chapter. Awww...Sesshy is a mama's boy!! ~Sesshy: What was that, wench? ~PD: Urk, when did he get ther-...*twitch* w-wench!? *eye twitches insanely* ~Inu-chan: Fluffy's in for it now... ~Sesshy: Hmph. What can a weak neko like you do to me, hm? ~PD: N-neko!? ~Sesshy: You are a tiger, are you not? Tigers are related to cats. Of course, YOU wouldn't know that. ~Inu-chan: -___- Fluffy just keeps digging a bigger and bigger hole...Hey, Sesshomaru! Did you forget about that staff of hers? Even worse, did you forget about her wrath? ~Sesshy: Please, she needs a staff to hurt me? Pathetic.... *PD in the background with her eye twitching like there's no tomorow* ~Inu-chan: Oh, yeah...I forgot to tell you. She was training the other day and can now use her powers even without the staff. The staff only makes it hurt more. ~Sesshy: You lie, half-breed. ~Inu-chan: See for yourself then... ~Sesshy: *glances over to PD who is on fire now* Oh, shit. ~PD: Weak and pathetic, eh!? *ZAP!!!* *Sesshy dodges it barely and takes off* COME BACK HERE, FLUFFY!!! ~Sesshy: (while running)As if a slow youkai such as yourself can catch this Sesshomaru. ~PD: WHAT!!?? ~Sesshy: Dammit. Me and my mouth. I'm turning into Inu Yasha. ~PD: *grabs Sesshy's yukata(?)* DIIIEEEE!!! *ZAP!* *PD shoots Sesshy without mercy* ~Inu-chan:-___-' Uh...I think PD wanted me to say...*takes out notecard* "Update really soon because I can't wait to find out what happens next. Love your story and keep up the great work!" *ZAAAAP!! followed by a crispy Sesshy and insane laughter from PD* ~Psycho Demoness~(^..^)
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Title: UpDaTe!!!
Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 20:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
~PD:Hehe...I just realized I hadn't reviewed in a while. My bad. I loved the chapter. Awww...Sesshy is a mama's boy!! ~Sesshy: What was that, wench? ~PD: Urk, when did he get ther-...*twitch* w-wench!? *eye twitches insanely* ~Inu-chan: Fluffy's in for it now... ~Sesshy: Hmph. What can a weak neko like you do to me, hm? ~PD: N-neko!? ~Sesshy: You are a tiger, are you not? Tigers are related to cats. Of course, YOU wouldn't know that. ~Inu-chan: -___- Fluffy just keeps digging a bigger and bigger hole...Hey, Sesshomaru! Did you forget about that staff of hers? Even worse, did you forget about her wrath? ~Sesshy: Please, she needs a staff to hurt me? Pathetic.... *PD in the background with her eye twitching like there's no tomorow* ~Inu-chan: Oh, yeah...I forgot to tell you. She was training the other day and can now use her powers even without the staff. The staff only makes it hurt more. ~Sesshy: You lie, half-breed. ~Inu-chan: See for yourself then... ~Sesshy: *glances over to PD who is on fire now* Oh, shit. ~PD: Weak and pathetic, eh!? *ZAP!!!* *Sesshy dodges it barely and takes off* COME BACK HERE, FLUFFY!!! ~Sesshy: (while running)As if a slow youkai such as yourself can catch this Sesshomaru. ~PD: WHAT!!?? ~Sesshy: Dammit. Me and my mouth. I'm turning into Inu Yasha. ~PD: *grabs Sesshy's yukata(?)* DIIIEEEE!!! *ZAP!* *PD shoots Sesshy without mercy* ~Inu-chan:-___-' Uh...I think PD wanted me to say...*takes out notecard* "Update really soon because I can't wait to find out what happens next. Love your story and keep up the great work! *ZAAAAP!! followed by a crispy Sesshy and insane laughter from PD* ~Psycho Demoness~(^..^)
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Title: marcus=naraku!
Reviewed By: paige89(not sighned in ^_^) On: April 28, 2004 20:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
am i right?! am i!? am i?! I AM! I TOTALLY AM! First i read the responses thingas and saw the whole naraku's in the fic BUT HIS NAME IS CHANGED thing. and the only character w/ an odd name is. . .MARCUS! Then i saw the whole marcus creating havoc thing at the end of the reviews thing. MARCUS=NARAKU!!! ALL THE WAY! I LOVE YOU! I HOPE YOU UNDERSTAND THAT! =^_^=
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Reviewed By: Youkai Yume (unsigned in) On: April 27, 2004 19:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yume: Beautiful, as always. CF: *Giggles* CF thinks it's kinda cute that Sesshomaru-sama lives with his mom! Yume: Girl, you better watch out where you say that.... CF: (blinks) Why? Yume: Because I have no doubt in my mind that if Sesshy were here, you'd be one charbroiled/chopped up kitsune/falcon... CF: *gulps* Yume: lol. Update soon! I love all of your works, as usual...
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Reviewed By: 2 On: April 27, 2004 02:39 EDT
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