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Title: marcus=naraku!
Reviewed By: paige89(not sighned in ^_^) On: April 28, 2004 20:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
am i right?! am i!? am i?! I AM! I TOTALLY AM! First i read the responses thingas and saw the whole naraku's in the fic BUT HIS NAME IS CHANGED thing. and the only character w/ an odd name is. . .MARCUS! Then i saw the whole marcus creating havoc thing at the end of the reviews thing. MARCUS=NARAKU!!! ALL THE WAY! I LOVE YOU! I HOPE YOU UNDERSTAND THAT! =^_^=
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Reviewed By: Youkai Yume (unsigned in) On: April 27, 2004 19:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yume: Beautiful, as always. CF: *Giggles* CF thinks it's kinda cute that Sesshomaru-sama lives with his mom! Yume: Girl, you better watch out where you say that.... CF: (blinks) Why? Yume: Because I have no doubt in my mind that if Sesshy were here, you'd be one charbroiled/chopped up kitsune/falcon... CF: *gulps* Yume: lol. Update soon! I love all of your works, as usual...
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Reviewed By: 2 On: April 27, 2004 02:39 EDT
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Reviewed By: japanese_angel12 On: April 26, 2004 21:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...i really luv this fic. i luv modern AU Sess/kag ficcies. there a big change from the CU fics. this fic is really good. i luv how u portrayed Kag....she's so funny. so wuts gonna happen next? hope u update real soon
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Title: BS or BC?? ^^
Reviewed By: Rain Of Stars (too lazy to sign in) On: April 02, 2004 21:32 EST
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Rain: *glomps SF-chan with a giant grin on her face* SF-CHAN!! ^^ Hehe! I know, sorry it's been a while! Well, life is...life (and a cereal LOL) and i haven't gotten the chance to review as much as i want to--but don't worry! I have been and will always read your AWESOME ficcies!! But, Hahaha! ^^ Yeah, i totally agree! BC is a MUCH better name than BS-- Sess: *sips coke and flips newspaper casually* Even if that's all Inuyasha ever sounds like when he sings... Inu: *over the table and grabbing Sesshou's collar in an instant huffing like a mad dog (^^)* What's that Fluffy?!? Sess: *casually flips newspaper again, staring at it and not Inu who is, by now, turning red in the face with anger* You sound like bulls**t. *sips coke as visible smoke appears out of Inu's ears (haha ^^)* In fact, we don't need you in the band. This Sesshoumaru is clearly the best choice. Inu: *REALLY peaved* WHY YOU-- Rain: *sighs, takes out SF-chan's special beaded bracelet present, breaks off a bead and throws it at Inu and he disappears in a puff of smoke* Works like a charm SF-chan! ^^ Hmmm...But i wonder where that put him...*scene switches to Inu regaining consciousness in a room with Kikyou as Inu screams for his life* >< *shrugs shoulders* Oh well! ^^ *Sesshou glances over at Rain and continues to read as he wraps his tail around her waist and pulls her closer to him* Cute story SF-chan! *giggles* But poor Kags! *Sesshou lifts a brow at the comment* She has to put up with such a jerk like Sesshoumaru!! *laughs but freezes on spot as she remembers Sesshou is right beside her* Sess: *stares at Rain with such a cold stare that she literally shivers* Nani?!? Rain: Eh...*shakes nervously but then remembers the beaded bracelet and gives a triumphant "HA!"* Forgot about these! *lifts a bead high up in the air* I can go anywhere i WANT with these babies! *Sesshou realizes what she's doing and calmly sits down waiting for her to continue* See ya later Fluffy! *tosses the bead in front of her, a puff of smoke appearing and Rain disappearing....into Sesshou's awaiting arms* EH?!? Sess: *sighs knowingly shaking his head* Rain, make sure that you don't WANT to be with me when you do that next time...*frowns irritably but with a little smirk on his features as Rain "Oh"s* Rain: *sweatdrops* Hmm...so the plan backfired. What else is knew?! ><
Anywho! Like i said, cute story! ^^ But it looks like Kag has an enemy already! ^^ Maybe a future member of the rival band?? Like, NARAKU'S BAND?? >< Lol! So no demons in this one, eh? Well, that's ok. Hot and rich rockstars are just as good! ^_~ Lol! Can't wait for more and hope to read more soon! *huggles* Ja ne! ^^ Rain
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Reviewed By: Stormy Nights Rainy Days [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2004 20:34 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG THIS IS SO KOOL update soon ne? If you dont I will send you at least one email a day....I am very determend lol! no seriously update soon please!
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Reviewed By: tsuki hana [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 17:19 EST
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Ooooooh!!! Love the Icicle Man song!! *snicker* And I agree with you about there not being enough Ses/Kag's out there! *sigh* If only I could write a decent one. Oh well! Great chapter and can't wait to see what happens between Kagome and the Icicle Man! *snicker* What a cute touch!!!
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Reviewed By: Miyumi [not signed in] On: March 25, 2004 13:43 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very creative fanfic and I love it!!! Please continue and update soon!!! I'm dieing to know what happens next!!!! ~Miyumi
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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru, logged out and unwilling to trouble myself with logging in On: March 24, 2004 22:25 EST
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Gah, I'm catching up on fics. I went through one week or so where I couldn't focus enough to read *frowns* Anyway...very cute! I think I said that before. I love the Kagome/Sesshoumaru interaction, and also Kagura's character. So delightfully bitch (^_^)
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Reviewed By: Black_widow(not signed in) On: March 24, 2004 20:00 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE IT SOON!! I LOVE ALL YOUR STORIES BUT THIS ONE IS TOTALLY AWSOME!!!! -Black Widow
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Reviewed By: Black_widow(not signed in) On: March 24, 2004 19:59 EST
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that was hella awsome!!!!! I REALLY LOVE YOUR STORIES AND I REALLY REALLY REALLY LIKE THIS ONE...PLEASE UPDATE SOON. -black widow
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Reviewed By: Youkai Yume *unsigned in* On: March 24, 2004 19:23 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yume: ARE YOU KIDDING?! CF: *shakes head* no way, jose! we don't mind at all! Yume: Nope, just a bit flattered, is all. But I love how everything is going. CF: Sessho-sama's going to be all "Grrrr" and Kagome's going to be like, "hehe" Yume: Excuse her. Yeah, that icicle man song was great though, it could be their new hit single! CF: *pause* No. *runs away screaming when Yume throws pillow* Yume: *huffs* Anyways, you know the standard comments. We loved it, everyone was totally in character, I kinda wished Kagura got the boot *literally* and *snickers* I kinda pictured my math teacher singing when it came to her. CF: O_O NOT MR. RAY! *gags* Yume: lol. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: IsisTheEgyptianGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 16:10 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Isis: Like the sound of that huh? ^_^ Anyways, I loved it! (But I love all of your stuff) Hmm, Kagome having a bf like our fav hanyou villain... O.O He's not abusive or anything is he?? Sesshou: I don't think SF would do something like that to Kagome. Isis: You never know... authoresses can do anything to you guys as long as it suits their plot. Wow, Kagura was such a bitch! Oh, and Sesshou's theme song was great! I about died. *starts singing* Icicle Man! Icicle Man! He has diarrhea of the mouth and blows icicles straight out of his ass!! Icicle Man!! Sesshou: >_< Shut up! You screeching voice sounds like a dying cat! Isis: I knew I was bad, but not that bad! Oh wells, I only sing where no one can hear anyways. ^_^ And thanks for making room to read my fic. Till next time! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 15:36 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!! please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: S1Cherry ^-^ On: March 24, 2004 15:34 EST
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heh, I love how you made Kagome act. ^-^ She's definitly got spunk. Go Kagome! *is laughing* I love the Sesshomaru theme song. too funny. I almost fell out of my seat like Koga did. in the beginning when you had Sango steal Rin's pizza, that's reminds me of some of my friends. Kagura was such a little bitch. though I did like how Koga and Inu said she eluded 'bitch' and 'slut', amusing. ^-^ can't wait to read the next chapter. later ^-^
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