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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 03:22 CDT
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You are getting better with every chapter. I like it when you start writing a situation, like when Duo is worried about the bikers and then the contrary happens. It is like showing your readers a mirror about real life. Who isn't afraid of a group of bikers? I would be, though I know that my worries are mostly based on prejudice. Duo is running and hiding again, but at least he is running to a safe place. What would he have done if Wufei hadned already returned from his mission? Waited on the doorstep? Wufei should teach him to think first and then act. And the reason for running? I guess that Duo has realised that he needs help, not only with his daughter. He is lonely and I'm certain it was that loneliness that caused him to drink again. Staying with Wufei would be a good idea, as long as Wufei is willing to let him stay.
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Reviewed By: MeLaiya [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 02:01 CDT
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Man, its about time.I love this, please hurry and update as soon as you possibly can. Or Im coming after you, i mean it. I will damn it!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 22:08 CDT
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*dabs at eyes* ohh please dona stop there..keep going i begg of you!!!
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 01:29 CDT
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OK sweetie, Mel's ready for some happiness now. You wrapped up this arc beautifully amidst all the sadness and confusion. As much as I love any 1x2x1 setup, I think the solution you chose was the best. Time changed both of them, and in the long run, they should see that they changed for the best. I was surprised by Wufei's exit, but then again, he had to get back to work. It'll be nice to see what you have in store for us next; perhaps a hefty lawsuit against the hospital beaurocrats and a Duo/Wufei reunion?
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 04:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this chapter was worth waiting for. Absolutly brilliant. The way you discribe their reaction is so realistic, you must have put a lot of thought into this. The explanations Heero gives to Quatre and Trowa are, well, I thought the whole time: That is as it would be in real life! No cheap and easy way out of the mess. With these reasons Heero and Duo give each other everything that has happend makes sense. Your writing is way above what I would call fanfiction!
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Reviewed By: SaintMe(not logged in, duh) On: August 02, 2004 21:25 CDT
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*taps her foot impatiently, trying to will her headache away* Alright. I've waited HOW long to read this next chapter? And what do I get? Aggrivation. Pure and simple. You guys are MEAN. MEAN I SAY. It's not fair!! The funeral was so sad, with so much angst and drama and longing and despair! (which I love, don't get me wrong) But Wufei just LEFT. Without saying a WORD really! Ugh... This is driving me nuts already. I hope ya'll write that next chapter soon, before I'm forced to threaten you....
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 00:56 CDT
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*looks at the empty box of tissues on her desk* finish..please!!!
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2004 23:33 CDT
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Another heart-breaking chapter. I wanted to give poor Duo a hug too! Well, I'm glad Heero and Duo got everything off their chests, but how are they going to explain that?
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Title: unexpected
Reviewed By: L_N [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2004 17:43 CDT
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I wasn't expecting them to do that at the end. nice twist there. The funeral was the saddest thing, though. a baby in a caskette- it doesn't get much sadder than that. great work. very sad, but great.
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Title: sad...
Reviewed By: l_n (unlogged in) On: March 14, 2004 19:12 CST
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The last line was the biggest tearjerker. "Help." Wow. You really pulled the ace of angst out your sleeve, there. Everything was so sad. I love how human you make them all, they all screw up and have regret. Some to obviously greater degrees than others. It's very thougthfully written! Incredible job.
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Reviewed By: MeLaiya On: March 14, 2004 18:45 CST
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Waaaahhhhhh, its sooo saaadddd. *Sniff* Poor duo. Keep up the good work,im loving it so far.
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Reviewed By: JenwhoisreallySaintMe On: March 06, 2004 01:37 CST
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*yawn* well... here is the review I promised to leave... don't know how well it will go, seeing as I'm lacking sleep here... meh I'm definitly liking the concept here ^_^ Though when the little one passed, I was nearly in tears... damnit, the last thing I wanted was to get emotional *poke*.... it was written fairly well though... There was quite a lot of saddness conveyed... ra Heero's a dick.... a dick that needs a serious ass-kicking... wtf man!? *grumbles and eyes her baseball bat*.... Yay for Wufei though... such a good friend... um... lets see... I can't really think of anything else to say, except I'm looking forward to seeing what happens ^_^ Hurry up and write!
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Reviewed By: l_n (not logged in) On: March 05, 2004 12:48 CST
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You make it easy to understand the story, even for readers who don't know much about the GW universe- it can stand by itself easily. That was sooooo sad! Wufei is such a loyal friend. I wonder what will happen next. Great job!
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Reviewed By: MeLaiya On: March 05, 2004 02:49 CST
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I love this. Hurry up and update, please. Your killing me here.
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Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 12:01 CST
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I am SO loving this fic, even if Heero IS an asshole!! ~snerk~ All day yesterday, I kept getting flashes of the story in my head, and kept trying to figure out where this would be going, and how! I can't wait for more!! ~gets economy size box of Kleenex ready~
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