| "What the Eyes Can't See" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: May 19, 2004 00:29 CDT
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That was such a sweet chapter!!!!!!!!!!! So much wonderful fluff!!!!!!!!! But who was watching them??? It could be Hojo but that would be freaky that he's following Kagome around. And someone was watching Sango and Miroku too right??? Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: oracle44 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 21:29 CDT
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Another cute chapter. I've been meening to read "Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy" and in one of my fics I put a reference to a "Star Trek Voyager" episode that had a reference to Hitchhiker's so I should read it. Oh and everybody should read the Dune series or at least the first 3 books. Anyway can't wait for next chapter.
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Title: EXCELLENT
Reviewed By: InuyashaGirlie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Great chapter! So you had to start over? Well I'm just glad that you finally got out a new update because I have to tell you it was EXCELLENT!! I give you a whole auditorium worth of applauds! Brovo! Brovo! SO sweet! Well can't wait for the next chapter so please update again soon when you can! :) P.S. I know you don't have too many reviews for this story but still it is great so you should never give up on it! I do want to suggest that if you don't have it posted on Fanfiction.net you should consider posting it there! Well bye!
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Reviewed By: bscl43 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 16:52 CDT
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what is 6x7? anyway this fic is just to cute. Poor Hojo, I do feel slightly bad for him but i'm sure he'll bounce back. Can't wait for more keep writing
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Reviewed By: tearosea On: May 18, 2004 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ive really enjoyed reading your story! If you like 1984 try a book called Anthem by Ayn Rand, same basic theme but a little different take on the subject matter!
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Reviewed By: oracle44 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2004 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
soo freaking cute.
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Reviewed By: Star-Child On: April 29, 2004 06:21 CDT
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New chappy soon pwease *Stares at the screen waiting for a new chapter* You can have a cookie! *gives cookie*
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 00:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story so far. I don't think Ive ever read a fic like this one, but Kagome does say some words I can't really picture her saying. A few spelling mistakes but nothing major. And Kagura can't really talk about anyone being a worthless hanyou because she's one too, she was made from Naraku so she can't be all demon. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_obsession [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 09:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story I hope you right more soon! I like fluff, maybe you can put more in the chapters to come cuz it is so cute! I was hoping that he would pick her up and put her on the couch so that she wouldn't have to sleep on the ground... oh well... I like the story, it's really good! Write soon!
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Reviewed By: inu fan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 00:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sooooooo good!!! write more.
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Title: SWEET!!
Reviewed By: InuyashaGirlie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 12:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really do love your story! I have read other ones where Inuyasha has gone blind, but nothing like yours! I'm so glad that Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship is finally going further! Oh, that kiss and all their thoughts are so sweet and they need to hurry up and realize how they feel about each other! Well I guess I have to be patient for that one...but anyway you are a really great writer and I love your long chapters so please keep them that way! Well keep up the great work and please update again soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Usagitsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 17:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it !!!^__^ Please go on ,write more!!!! Bye!~~
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Title: LOVE IT!!
Reviewed By: InuyashaGirlie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 22:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love the way you write!! It is so good and the plot is fabulous! It makes me want to come back for more so please don't give up on this fic and update soon! Please! :)
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Reviewed By: Faye273 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 08:22 CST
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This is a great fic! Can't wait to read more ^_^
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_obsession [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 14:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am a big fan of your stories. 'I Do...' '500 Years in the Making' and 'I Still Need You...' But then you came out with this one and another! And I still love them all! I love Inu/Kag stories! I hope you continue this fic and 'I Still Need You...' real soon! I can't wait! Just one thing about 'I Do...' did Kagome get trapped in her time, I mean why would she cry if she could just hop back in and down the well. I think that must have been what happened...right? Anyways please keep writing all of your stories because I look forward to the next chapters!
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