| "What the Eyes Can't See" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 00:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story so far. I don't think Ive ever read a fic like this one, but Kagome does say some words I can't really picture her saying. A few spelling mistakes but nothing major. And Kagura can't really talk about anyone being a worthless hanyou because she's one too, she was made from Naraku so she can't be all demon. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_obsession [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 09:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story I hope you right more soon! I like fluff, maybe you can put more in the chapters to come cuz it is so cute! I was hoping that he would pick her up and put her on the couch so that she wouldn't have to sleep on the ground... oh well... I like the story, it's really good! Write soon!
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Reviewed By: inu fan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 00:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sooooooo good!!! write more.
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Title: SWEET!!
Reviewed By: InuyashaGirlie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 12:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really do love your story! I have read other ones where Inuyasha has gone blind, but nothing like yours! I'm so glad that Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship is finally going further! Oh, that kiss and all their thoughts are so sweet and they need to hurry up and realize how they feel about each other! Well I guess I have to be patient for that one...but anyway you are a really great writer and I love your long chapters so please keep them that way! Well keep up the great work and please update again soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Usagitsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 17:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it !!!^__^ Please go on ,write more!!!! Bye!~~
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Title: LOVE IT!!
Reviewed By: InuyashaGirlie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 22:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love the way you write!! It is so good and the plot is fabulous! It makes me want to come back for more so please don't give up on this fic and update soon! Please! :)
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Reviewed By: Faye273 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 08:22 CST
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This is a great fic! Can't wait to read more ^_^
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_obsession [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 14:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am a big fan of your stories. 'I Do...' '500 Years in the Making' and 'I Still Need You...' But then you came out with this one and another! And I still love them all! I love Inu/Kag stories! I hope you continue this fic and 'I Still Need You...' real soon! I can't wait! Just one thing about 'I Do...' did Kagome get trapped in her time, I mean why would she cry if she could just hop back in and down the well. I think that must have been what happened...right? Anyways please keep writing all of your stories because I look forward to the next chapters!
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