| "A Slave's Tale" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 On: March 26, 2004 03:16 EST
Comment/Review:
Ok i'm hooked give me more. Good opening i gotta have more can't wait for an update.
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Reviewed By: 12blue12(logged off) On: March 05, 2004 22:14 EST
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lol wow kagome kicks ass too bad kag cant make kouga stop wat he does it kinda bugs me well any way coolie update and hope more come soon ! cya!
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 05:30 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good pairings, keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 16:23 EST
Comment/Review:
*feeds your muse lots of candy* keep writing..looks good!!!
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Reviewed By: saccharine-ish [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 16:00 EST
Comment/Review:
this is really great! I cant wait to see where you go from here. i added it to my favs. usually the slave fics are all bad and stuff, but this one is really good. update soon
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Title: Good readin' !
Reviewed By: uramuohsseS On: March 02, 2004 15:51 EST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Just posted and now read. I did not notice any major spelling and grammar errors, so that's good. Also, I haven't read many about the present with the youkai still there and in control, so that's cool! Plus the way the characters interacted seemed real; they were not OOC. :) I really enjoyed your fic! I can't wait until the updated chapters come out! Yay!
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