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Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 17:51 CST
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Does it hase to be an one-shot *pulls puppy-eyes* atleast make one of Miroku/Sango ... *tries to look even more kawaii'er* ... okay this 'kawaii-looking-trick' is giving me a headache ... anywayz on with my review 'bout this fic ... you, are a genuis for making this, love it girl! keep up the good work! you're at my list of fav. autors! K!$$ LiL Tennyo
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Reviewed By: Ryu Sachiko Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 15:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Luv it! Write another one! i enjoyed this one!!! I just cant express it in words!!
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Reviewed By: LadyNight(Not Signed In) On: March 05, 2004 12:53 CST
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An amazing fic! i never really thought about it but your right about how Inuyasha wouldn't have known exsactly how to act intamite with Kagome. Will there be more to the story?
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Title: Old dogs, new tricks...ouch!!!
Reviewed By: Winter-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2004 23:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
(don't take the nines personally...10s are a very rare thing from me..::grin::) A very original story...not just a new spin, but rather a decent combo of two major streams of thought (Inu Yasha as really bad/rape and Inu Yasha as really good lover)...perhaps a little extreme, but far more realistic than all those stories where he's somehow endowed with the innate knowledge of how to be a good lover when he did not, in fact, have anyone to raise him. Kudos and keep up the good work!!
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