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Title: Well.....
Reviewed By: Dolarodus On: February 20, 2005 20:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Uh. I really like the story. I don't really like the idea of how Kagome punishes Inuyasha. It fits, But I'm a guy and it seems a little sick to me. Great storyline. I haven't read the sequal yet but I definitely will. Wonderful job on the sexual scenes. First person point of veiw is not a good idea. You did an amazingly good job with it though. You keep writing. I'll keep reading. The Wolf Of Endless Winter, Dolarodus
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Reviewed By: DeathChildInuLover666 On: July 07, 2004 01:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
og my fuckin kami-sama that was so good! i really really really love this fic.I started to laugh as kagome but her brush some where it didnt need to go but then i started to feel sad at how inuyasha wimpered and started to cry! Poor kagome for having to show him that way the way it felt for her! im so sad and happy!! you did an exellent job on the fic and i love it!!
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 14:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWW THIS IS SOOOOOO SWEET
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Title: Finally
Reviewed By: Hinakun On: June 01, 2004 23:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally I find something that hasn't been written by an thirteen year old boy who wants to jack off to his story. This was very well done, with the lemony part of it as a piece of the story, not the defining item. The Point of View you used (switching back and forth between them) is very effective and allows the thoughts of both characters to be brought out. Very well done, I look forward to a sequel (doesnt seem as though it would need or use one) or other works from you.
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 14:57 CST
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loved the story!
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 08:55 CST
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*gasp*!! That was so great!! Finally, after pushing through piles upon piled of crap, I find a good story! Like a diamond in a pile of coal.... alright that was corny, but you don't know how happy I am!
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Title: ~_~
Reviewed By: sire of death On: March 15, 2004 04:44 CST
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This was great! I loved your use of words and such and I thought that your uptake of it all was quite true and real. Many fics are fake and so completely perfect its unnatural... This one was real. Please keep it up and write more, I really can't wait! You are very talented, don't waste it like some do.
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Reviewed By: noel&jenn On: March 13, 2004 00:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW how awsome !! love the way you showed what was going on in both of there minds .. kind of like how guys and women think diffent thoughts at the same time and how that neither is "wrong .. " just diffrent .. good job and GREAT fic :)
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Reviewed By: The Girl in Purple On: March 12, 2004 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an interesting fic. You've taken a new angle on Inuyasha Kagome that I'd never really thought of. All in all, the only problem that kept me from giving you tens all around is you need to go over your spelling and grammar with a fine-toothed comb. There are a couple of sentences that don't make perfect sense and a few commonly misspelled words. Then again I find grammatical errs in commercially published works so coming from me it doesn't mean much. Keep writing you do it very well.
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Title: Here i am again....
Reviewed By: Ryu Sachiko Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2004 10:30 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just re-read it! i think.... I luv it even more! And did you know i dont re-read one shots unless i think they're really good?! Muchless, i dont review twice either!!! This is a wonderful story i wish you would continue, this is a very exhilerating and, how should i say, creative story! I enjoyed it and on a scale of one to ten, i rate..... Ten thousand! Plz Continue, *Pushes Author towards the computer*
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Reviewed By: synthetichopes On: March 06, 2004 08:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I can't think of anything to say but WOW. For once, I can't think of one thing a fic needs to improve. This is on my favorites list, for when I DO log in (frozen heart). Honestly, one of the best fics I've ever read. I like how you did it from both points of view, it was much more in depth than if you only did one of them. -Synthetichopes
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Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 17:51 CST
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Does it hase to be an one-shot *pulls puppy-eyes* atleast make one of Miroku/Sango ... *tries to look even more kawaii'er* ... okay this 'kawaii-looking-trick' is giving me a headache ... anywayz on with my review 'bout this fic ... you, are a genuis for making this, love it girl! keep up the good work! you're at my list of fav. autors! K!$$ LiL Tennyo
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Reviewed By: Ryu Sachiko Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 15:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Luv it! Write another one! i enjoyed this one!!! I just cant express it in words!!
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Reviewed By: LadyNight(Not Signed In) On: March 05, 2004 12:53 CST
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An amazing fic! i never really thought about it but your right about how Inuyasha wouldn't have known exsactly how to act intamite with Kagome. Will there be more to the story?
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Title: Old dogs, new tricks...ouch!!!
Reviewed By: Winter-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2004 23:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
(don't take the nines personally...10s are a very rare thing from me..::grin::) A very original story...not just a new spin, but rather a decent combo of two major streams of thought (Inu Yasha as really bad/rape and Inu Yasha as really good lover)...perhaps a little extreme, but far more realistic than all those stories where he's somehow endowed with the innate knowledge of how to be a good lover when he did not, in fact, have anyone to raise him. Kudos and keep up the good work!!
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