| "When darkness falls" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: angel0fs0rr0w::not logged in:: On: April 21, 2004 17:56 CDT
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plz plz plz plz update!!! asap, for me? ^_^ i'd be very very happy!!
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Reviewed By: rin88 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 16:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your sory and i can't wait until you update.
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 01:41 CDT
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hey great chapter so far. but you uploaded it twice. but it was good. i hope nothing bad happens to kagome. Inuyasha has to protect her.. lol well update asap and keep up the good work. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: angel0fs0rr0w666 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 20:08 CDT
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that was great! but uh.. you have some errors on it and you posted the same chapter twice... okie.. whoa, de ja vu. um, yeah, great, update soon, and... yeeeeeahhh.
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Reviewed By: inu_obsessed_chic27 (2 lazy 2 sign in) On: April 13, 2004 18:29 CDT
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I'd be glad to help u wit a new fic!!!!! ummm, wonderin if u noticed, but u posted da same chappie twice...... xactly how do you want me to help you? I will gladly do so... once I figure out wat its a bout... I luved da chappie! NNooooo Kagome can't be given to her!!! I've eaten alotta suga there fore cannot be held responsible for my actions! NOw, I will leave a warning.... Update soon or I'll eat you!!!! rememba, cna't be held respnsible for my actions
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 16:34 CDT
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wooo yeah!! an update!! This was a great chapter to. that little scene with inu and kag really gave me shivers. he's SUCH a hottie *drools*. I hope you update soon...and was there supposed to be two chapter 5s? i hope you update soon. this story is to gr8.
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Reviewed By: inu_obsessed_chic27 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 17:01 CDT
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U said ur ritng a fic called liar liar and I'd lyke to help u if u want me too. just email me and tell me wat da fic is bout. unless of course u already have sumbody helpin......
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Reviewed By: angel0fs0rr0w666 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 00:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PleaSe upDate! i ReaLly wAnt tO kNow wHat hAppeNs!!!! i like diS stoRry!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 09:22 CST
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hey that was great! but if inuyasha feeds kagome to anybody then your going to be swimming with the fishes ... just kidding. i trust you not to do that. inuyasha the vampire ... sounds differnt but its well inuyasha anything is posible .. except him being nice. anyways i have to go now i hope you can update soon. ja ne
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Reviewed By: Orb (not online) On: March 14, 2004 18:05 CST
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oh good he didnt kill her, I hope they can get together. The tension between Inu and Kagome AND the whole vampire sex appeal? How can it be wrong?!
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Reviewed By: inu_obsessed_chic27 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 19:21 CST
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Hi again! I luv ur fic, absolutely da best! Makes me wish i had thought of it. Dat's okay, though. Hmmm wonder wats gonna happen next and I'm guessing dat it was Kouga who interupted them?
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Reviewed By: kikimp34 On: March 13, 2004 16:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ilike my story too But I can't read your reviews!
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Reviewed By: Lemony Fresh [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 17:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
blah!!! a cliff?!?! noo damnit! update or you'll feel my wrath!!! *cackles* that was a goooooood chapter! ^_~ awesome work!
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 02:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey great story so far. i really like it. keep up the good work. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: lancrGrlSingrGrl_5069 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 22:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice! Not very good at reviewing well then bye!
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