| "Her Battle" Reviews/Comments [ 54 ] |
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 09:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 13 it was great. Keep those chapters coming. You are an artist.
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Reviewed By: Fade9wayz [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 09:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hello, I'm a total Mina/Rei fan, so with this chapter, I felt much more content. I'm glad you didn't make a jerk out of Mamoru, I don't really like him either, but he doesn't deserve it and it's too easy. I must admit I was wondering if you would pair Mina up with someone. I initially thought you'd maybe pair her up with Setsuna... Anyway, more things to think about for Rei ^^. Good story ^^ Just watch the verb tenses. You tend to mix up present and past tenses in the same sentence. And I see Lightningstrikes is pestering you too for a Makoto abuse fic -sighs- This kid... Anyway, keep it up ^^
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 11:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 12 it was great. Keep those chapters coming. You are an artist.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 09:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 11 it was great. Keep those chapters coming. You are an artist.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 09:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 10 it was great. Keep those chapters coming. You are an artist.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 11:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 9 it was great. Keep sending in those chapters. You are an artist.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 09:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 8 it was great. Keep those chapters coming. You are an artist.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 09:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 7 it was great. Keep sending in those chapters. You are an artist.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 11:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want action in the next chapter. Chapter 6 was great. Keep those chapters coming. You are an artist.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 09:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 6 it was great. Keep those chapters coming. You are an artist.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 09:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 5 it was great. Keep those chapters coming. You are an artist.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 09:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 3 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 09:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 4 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 09:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 2 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 09:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 1 it was great.
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