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Title: Please continue soon!!!
Reviewed By: Hiryo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 07:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It feels like some ensee tiiny little cherry is left of. But that is it. I wonder whom he would be to marry? Will it be Nabiki the loanshark or Kodachi? Both would fit in perfectly into hell. Could you explain in the following 2 chapters why and how Ranma is in hell? Are all the others too changed like Ranma? Hope some lecherous ways influenced Ranma in Hell and he is in the fun becaus he has some problems to think about. Hope you continue.
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Reviewed By: Lord_Raa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 11:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This contiues to tease and intrigue me. Please write a few more chapters, I would like to see where you plan to take this one. One thing though, I thought that the plural of succubus was succubi.
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Reviewed By: Lord_Raa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 06:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
An intriguing start, but you only get a 6 at this time because there is not much to go on. With a more few more chapters, I can see this one being quite entertaining. That is all for now.
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