| "Tales From Hades" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tetrambs [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 02:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurray!! Something original for a change. From what i've gathered on the class system for incubus's and such. May I assume that this is going to become a Oh! My Goddes cross over?? If so may I make a request? We'll since you can't say no yet I'll go one anyway - I want Belldandy to get her ass kicked. It doesn't need to be on purpose, just as long as she is hurt severly, and it doesn't even need to be Ranma's fualt... just really funny. I can't think of anyone else who has done this, this would be total original and funny - atleast for me. Oh well, great story, hurry up and make more, ect ect.
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Reviewed By: Gopu On: December 08, 2004 19:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Good chapter
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Reviewed By: TirGhost On: December 08, 2004 17:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now that was a fun read. Hope you keep going like that. Totally great, nothing else to be said.
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Reviewed By: portercu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 05:53 CDT
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Cool story bud. I hope you dont pick akane in this one, but im biased. Ive never liked that character. And i cant wait to see what you do to kodachi, that could be a very interesting character to play around with. I do like the nabiki as a vampire thing is very cool. catch you later bud
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Reviewed By: Lord Aries Greymon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 19:02 CDT
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\is too busy laughing to leave a proper review at this time/ Good story! Haha! Sincerely, \chuckles/ Lord Aries Greymon
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Reviewed By: Gopu On: October 20, 2004 01:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great chapter
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Reviewed By: HappyPig [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 04:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
A good fic but i since your asking for 5 reviews per chapter to keep writing you would think that the chapters would be longer.
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Reviewed By: Kivarn On: October 18, 2004 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good story, but please, if we do have to get 5 reviews, can you please make the chapters longer at least? Anyways, how about Ryouga the Pyromancer, or Ryouga the Goblin(troll,ogre, pig-beast, or finally, Ryouga the [something that warps] but doesn't have any control of the power causing him to be lost all over the world.
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Reviewed By: DJ On: October 07, 2004 19:38 CDT
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I agree with Kivarn, Change the number of reviews to three. Either that, or change it to the number of views. Not too sure where the story is headed at this point in the "bigger picture".
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Reviewed By: Kivarn On: October 03, 2004 21:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is quite good, but please go and reconsider changing the reviews to three... i don't want to wait for 5 people to review
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Reviewed By: Jade eye's On: September 21, 2004 23:33 CDT
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Very nifty. So does Kouno still see Akane has his "fierce tigress" or is she and her family something to be smited, and wait till he gets a peek at Ranma! ^_^
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Reviewed By: fireprincess59 On: September 09, 2004 21:56 CDT
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I've read the 4th chapter as well. I LOVE it. You sould keep on going.
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Reviewed By: fireprincess59 On: September 09, 2004 21:54 CDT
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I read the 3rd chapter. KEEP GOING YOU CAN DO IT! I know it was weird for me to say that but you can! GO all the way. **I ish weird if you haven't noticed.**
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Reviewed By: fireprincess59 On: September 09, 2004 21:52 CDT
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I read the second chapter. I loved it. fairly cool. Still no suggestions ish to tired..... Any way this tis the 20th review which means another cahpter.
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Reviewed By: fireprincess59 On: September 09, 2004 20:57 CDT
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I like it. You should continue. As for suggestions I'm not good at story writting so I have no suggestions. Sorry.
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