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| "Loop Hole of Love" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 › » ] | Reviewed By: wanderer05 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 18:04 CDT
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what happens next?
| Title: ooooo
Reviewed By: rurouniturtle [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 16:51 CDT
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the story is so cool!!!!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! ^^
| Reviewed By: amanda4271 On: October 17, 2004 01:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okok everything was good until now! that sucks 20th centry!what?! i like ancient eygpt alot better! comeon now we all know you can write better than this pls fix things!
| Title: ooohhh
Reviewed By: wanderer05 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 20:07 CDT
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where's the next chapter? i wanna know what happens next!!
| Reviewed By: amanda 3765 On: September 24, 2004 17:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sweet dose this mean that they are all gonna be married to each other? ._. ???? i am confussed!!!! ah! but anyways i love this story don ever stop writing it!
| Reviewed By: Yelene and Yoshe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 16:30 CDT
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Wow. I'm gonna cry. U__U I'm gonna cry. I'm crying. T___T Yes, I'm crying. And I'm confused. Very very confused. How did it go from them loving Avari to them loving each other? AND WHY?! Well, I suppose Avari having a relationship with them is out of the picture. But she loves them so much. Oh, yes I am crying. Crying very hard now. T__T What in the name of Ra is Avari going to do now? She is just so selfless. She is willing to give up any chance to be with them in order to make them happy. My Ra! This is sad. I loved the last chapter; it did make me feel better. Thank you. I still don't understand all this, but I'm willing to wait for an explanation. Take a good long break. You earned it. Ja Ne!
| Reviewed By: Ari769 On: September 18, 2004 11:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow justkeep geeting better and better! i love this stroy!!!!
| Reviewed By: Yelene and Yoshe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 11:13 CDT
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Hello! I'm back and still safe and sound. In my neighborhood, there was very little damage, just a few tree branches on the ground. No missing roofs and only one fallen tree. So we were lucky. I'm glad I can finally get on the computer again, after not having electricity for more than a day. So please update soon. Ja Ne!
| Reviewed By: Yelene and Yoshe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2004 16:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again, sorry I didn't get to review yesterday. I was so busy. On account of Hurricane Ivan coming my way, I may miss a few days. But I'll be back soon. I promise. Great chapter! I can't wait to see Yami and Seto's reactions to that little tid bit of information. Update soon. Ja ne!
| Reviewed By: witchhunterR [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2004 15:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! great she loves both of them even better! what will happen now? oh pls update soon!
| Reviewed By: Yelene and Yoshe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 16:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh, how sad! Domino loses his life and his lover, and Avari loses her best friend and her blood innocence. How depressingly sad! Sorry I couldn't review for the last chapter. The teachs had me so booked down with homework, I barely even got near the computer. Last chapter was really cool. You got Tea out of the way AND strangled her (THANK YOU)! Hehehehe. The gifts were cute! Too bad we didn't get to Malik and Yami's gifts, but the whole taking-over-the-world thing kinda doesn't leave much room for gift exchanges. I hope Yami, Seto and Bakura are still alive and will make an appearance next chapter. Here's a little thing to help ease the pain of kiling off your own character: We, here, mourn the passing of a wonderful friend and a devoted lover. Domino, who was with us for such a short time, shall live on within our hearts for eternity. May the kindness he has shown others and the love he had for life be an example for us all. May the gods of Egypt each shine blessings upon his afterlife. Go in peace, dear friend. **Wipes tear** Anyway, on a happier note, it was a skillfully done chapter and a joy to read. Now tell me, aren't you having fun continuing the story? It has to be as fun to write as it is to read. And well, think of it this way, with me here you always have at least someone to review each chapter. By the way, don't get discouraged if it seems like not enough people are visiting because usually they don't get around to reading every day. Update soon. Ja Ne!
| Reviewed By: witchhunterR [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 16:22 CDT
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T_T wow that was really sad! i hope yami is okay please say so! and she really kicked some serious butt dodnt she? okay well update soon1
| Reviewed By: Yelene and Yoshe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2004 10:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll say you got descriptive, and the men were positively deeee-licious. Yum! (*licking lips*) O_O' Whoops! Sorry. Got caught off topic. But really the bishis are just soooooo gorgeous! ^^; I don't know how Avari stands being around them everyday and not pouncing on them. I'm guessing Yami gives his input next chapter as well as Malik. By the way, I don't know if you believe in Tea/Anzu bashing, but if you don't (which I don't really either, I just don't like her because she's always after MY Yami!!! >_< DIE TEA/ANZU!!! O.O Sorry! Got carried away again.) then make her disappear somehow! Or I might leap into the story and strangle her. Hehehehehehe. Anyway! Wonderful chappie! Wonderful steamy-goodness chappie! Wonderful sugar-coated, steamy-goodness, jaw-dropping chappie! (*Sugar high! Beware!*) Can't wait to read more, so put that keyboard to the pedal and roll out another chapter soon. Pwease! (*BIG HIKARI-CUTSIE-PUPPY-DOG-EYES* Feel the power of my hikari-cutsie-puppy-dog-eyes!* Bwahahahaha!) Ja ne! ahah¡
| Reviewed By: Yelene and Yoshe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooooooh! Brilliantly done! I loved it. I'm sooooo happy you changed your mind. It's true, you should do this for you (ACK! Rymning...-_-'), no matter what anyone says. It's the joyful power of being a writer! ^____^ You control the story. I liked the descriptions, and the legend of the Millenium Dice certainly added to the plot. I just can't wait to see what happens. Cute idea with the mirror. Ooooh to see Malik's reaction! Hehehehehe. By the way, with the whole "affecting at least two lives" I wasn't kidding or trying to make up some sappy nonsense. You do affect at least two lives: yours and mine. Your writing gains you experience and knowledge with a little bit of friendly reader encouragement thrown in, and it affects me by showing me the imagination and writing skills of others, which will ultimately affect my writing in some manner. You are a talented writer and remember, do it for yourself if no one else. I'll keep reading your story and I'll try to review each new chapter, if I can. I very happy I could help and I hope you have plenty of luck in continuing this story. I'll try to alert other people to check out your story, too.
| Title: Good Luck
Reviewed By: Yelene and Yoshe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 16:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT?! You're ending it there??????? Don't get me wrong, it was eloquently done, but it's just so abrupt for your story. And how can you say that no one reads your story? Just check the visit rate. Trust me on this, very few bother to review...ever. I hardly get any reviews. But you shouldn't stop. At least not yet anyway. A good friend once told me, if only one person reads it, you've already affected at least two lives. So if only one person reviews or even visits, it is still important to them. People's views change everyday, but those that are true have been there from the beginning. Even I have read this story since it first started, but never got around to reviewing before. And, beside the point, it's important to you! You wouldn't have written it, if it wasn't. You wouldn't have been updating so much in the past couple weeks if it wasn't. So if it's important to you, you shouldn't change your course for ANYONE. You are a GOOD writer, and the more you write, the better you become. You have done so well so far. Do you really want to give it up now? I shall support you and your decision either way, but just to let you know, MM.org is considering getting rid of "you" stories and readers will have to find other 'scapelets for original characters. I really hope you will reconsider your decision but I care about you and this story, so I'll get over it if you decide not. I wish you the very best of luck and hope I will see more of your work in the future.
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