| "Loop Hole of Love" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Title: yo that was ok but..........
Reviewed By: KaTiEcAtLyOnS On: June 07, 2005 13:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok that was good but i think it was just a little to sexual but hey i am a newbie so....i give it a 7 and i can wat 4 the next chapter! thanx!
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Reviewed By: witchhunterR [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 22:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
once again you have outdone your self!! i cant get enough of this story!! i love it!!!! and thanks for the recognition!!(sp?) ~Aya~
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Reviewed By: rurouniturtle [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 19:59 CST
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I think that was a good chapter, that was one of the better love scenes I have ever seen written, KUDOS TO YOU! I just wonder how everyone else will take to this >.< don't mind me, I'm just being crazy and slightly skiddish, meds will do that to you. yup yup
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Reviewed By: witchhunterR [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 19:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! i loved it pls keep writing i cant wait for more this has to be my fav! ~aya~ 1-10 i give 12!
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Reviewed By: witchhunterRnotloggedin On: November 30, 2004 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sweeeet i love this
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Reviewed By: rurouniturtle [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 11:21 CST
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That chapter was so sweet, too bad halloween is past and gone, you could've had a halloween party, with everyone dressing up, like a masquerade party (my spelling is BAD) but maybe a masquerade party could be planned for later *hopeful*
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Reviewed By: Tabitha Michaud [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2004 15:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! That was so funny! Avari and Yami in the bathroom. O____O ^____^ Hehehe! Avari was so very good this chapter. "What is Victoria's Secret?" Does Domino have a reincarnation, too? I like how Avari is slowly figuring out the modern-day world. And the continuous plot banter between Avari and Yami and Avari and Bakura is very amusing. I can't wait to see Yami and Bakura's reaction to Avari's slight infatuation with Duke. Keep up the wonderful writing. Bai-bai!
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Title: OMG!!!
Reviewed By: kirby_04 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 20:41 CST
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Oh yeah! Those were greatness! I can't wait to read your next update! And Duke DEFINITELY needs more air time, he cracks me up with his arrogant self!! And I love the whole Avari getting stuck in the 20th century for a while, I think it adds a bit more of a twist to the whole Yami/Avari relationship, especially since Yami doesn't remember anything and Avari does! I wonder how she'll cope mentally? Afterall, she did run out (in ancient egypt) during a "scary" situation. If she was that upset about it, I was surprised she didn't go off on Yami in present day (Bakura may had to have held her back)!
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Title: *blinks* and notices the bazillion extra chapters...!
Reviewed By: kirby_04 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 19:51 CST
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OMG!!! I didn't know you would take me seriously; you sounded so distraught when you ended your story!! That's why I haven't been back!! :: bows a million times like Tohru Honda :: I. Am. SO. SORRY!!! GAH!!! But it's still great work!! I will go read the rest now and then review again!!
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Reviewed By: Yelene and Yoshe [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 15:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, there! I know I haven't reviewed in a long time, but I have been keeping up with your updates. I was a teensy bit uncomfortable with the whole Yami/Avari/Seto relationship. I mean I like that Yami likes Avari and that Seto likes Avari, but Yami and Seto liking each other becomes awefully intense. I still love the story though, especially how Avari has grown as a character. The travel to the 20th century gives a bit of variation to the continual Ancient Egypt setting. Plus, it will be fun to see the reactions of the Yu-Gi-Oh gang to Avari's true identity and Avari's reaction to the 20th century world. I can't wait to read more. Also, the romance begins again. Yami and Seto have no recollection of their past love for her, so that means, they will have to fall in love again. Hopefully, Avari can learn to forgive herself and Yami for past mistakes. I have a feeling that's the only way they'll save the future. Again, I apologize for taking so long to come back and review. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: rurouniturtle [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2004 21:11 CDT
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how dare you steal my idea!!!!! *raises a small spoon* BACK KAORI BACK!!!!!! *the figure at the keyboard cringes away* NO! NOT COMMANDER SPOON!!!!!! Alrighty then, woooo, now Avari has what 5 guys looking after her sort of. What is a poor girl to do, find a new man and runaway? >.>
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Reviewed By: wanderer05 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 18:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
what happens next?
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Title: ooooo
Reviewed By: rurouniturtle [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 16:51 CDT
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the story is so cool!!!!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! ^^
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Reviewed By: amanda4271 On: October 17, 2004 01:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okok everything was good until now! that sucks 20th centry!what?! i like ancient eygpt alot better! comeon now we all know you can write better than this pls fix things!
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Title: ooohhh
Reviewed By: wanderer05 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 20:07 CDT
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where's the next chapter? i wanna know what happens next!!
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