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| "A Game of Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: Mehi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 22:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really need to work on spelling. You're spelling is pathetic, though mine's not much better. I also have grammer problems,but Kurama's human name is Suichi, not Shuichi. Just thought you would like to know.
| Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in) On: March 11, 2004 18:24 CST
Comment/Review:
pretty darn good! i really think you should go on!
| Reviewed By: WhiteXRose [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 10:03 CST
Comment/Review:
That was a great start! I suggest getting a friend to read it over since there are some mistakes (and I know you wouldn't want your parents to read it). . . -_-; Despite that, it was very good! BlackPanther is my best friend, so I check out her reviews everyday and I noticed you said you wanted her to check it out, so I decided to check it out! Nice choice of character, too! Feel free to ask me any questions about anything! Keep writing! -WXR
| Reviewed By: mehi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2004 19:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey kitta I already read this one. I know how it ends too. Anywho its good. I love the ending and I recomend anyone who reads the first part to read the rest. It gets GOOD, Very Good! C-Ya
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