| "A Game of Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: mughi-chan On: June 24, 2004 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is good! don't lissen to anyone who says other wise.
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Reviewed By: Kitta (not logged in) On: June 08, 2004 15:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Do you not know how to write a review!(To Re-a) I'm embaressed to even call you my cousin.
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Reviewed By: re-a On: June 08, 2004 13:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
stop cryin and pleaz update i want kill you if you do....... so PPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ update pleaz pleaz pleaz update...^_^ i really like your story
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Reviewed By: re-a On: June 08, 2004 13:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love you.... so pleaz UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OR I WILL PERSONALLY KILL YOU WHEN YOU COME TO MY HOUSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: re-a On: June 08, 2004 13:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love you.... so pleaz UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OR I WILL PERSONALLY KILL YOU WHEN YOU COME TO MY HOUSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: re-a On: June 08, 2004 13:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love you.... so pleaz UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OR I WILL PERSONALLY KILL YOU WHEN YOU COME TO MY HOUSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: re-a On: June 08, 2004 13:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love you.... so pleaz UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OR I WILL PERSONALLY KILL YOU WHEN YOU COME TO MY HOUSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: crimson7319 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 18:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it, the only thing i can think of that might help you is kitta going to the park to look fer hiei and thank him. thank you fer reviewing my story as well
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Reviewed By: mughi-chan On: May 19, 2004 14:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE RIGHT THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! I just found this story and I think it is great. I want to know what happens next, so please right the next chapter. {and yes I know I used the rong right but I don't give I just starded summer break and I'm still trying to get all my teachers leachers out or my head} Oh you could make Hiei and Kitty pay Krama back for somthing or beat up Yuske {my ideas suck but you asks for them so I gave the ideas I had even if they do suck}
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Reviewed By: foxylady On: May 11, 2004 21:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story even though i have already read all the chapters but i real keep on readin
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Reviewed By: dark_fire_demon19 (not logged in) [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 10:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked ur story, i wanna see wat happends next!!! SO UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: Mehi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 22:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really need to work on spelling. You're spelling is pathetic, though mine's not much better. I also have grammer problems,but Kurama's human name is Suichi, not Shuichi. Just thought you would like to know.
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in) On: March 11, 2004 18:24 CST
Comment/Review:
pretty darn good! i really think you should go on!
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Reviewed By: WhiteXRose [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 10:03 CST
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That was a great start! I suggest getting a friend to read it over since there are some mistakes (and I know you wouldn't want your parents to read it). . . -_-; Despite that, it was very good! BlackPanther is my best friend, so I check out her reviews everyday and I noticed you said you wanted her to check it out, so I decided to check it out! Nice choice of character, too! Feel free to ask me any questions about anything! Keep writing! -WXR
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Reviewed By: mehi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2004 19:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey kitta I already read this one. I know how it ends too. Anywho its good. I love the ending and I recomend anyone who reads the first part to read the rest. It gets GOOD, Very Good! C-Ya
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