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"Little Lady Bug!!!" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ]
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 Reviewed By: Black B. Kirin  On: March 19, 2004 23:27 CST
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Tantrum throwing.. *snorts* LOL! That was unexpected. Gee, wonder what the maze is all about? Keep writing! Hope the next chapter comes out soon. *pets Shute tentively* He's spunky all right. I don't mind that. It's just the girliness. I liked him in the beginning of the series since he reminded me of myself, plus he was helping Captain a lot. But then he started to lay on the ditz charm a bit too much (no offense meant. I'm just stating my opinion) and he wasn't really helping. He appeared to be just a liabilty that can only root for Captian. *shrugs* But, here's the other half to my opnion, HE IS WAAAAY BETTER THAN SAYLA!!
 Title: Rrrrrrrrgrrrrrrr
Reviewed By: Charon the Sabercat  On: March 19, 2004 20:55 CST
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I like the story... but I DESPISE children who through tantrums! It's not cute at all, it's annoying and loud and I've nearly gone deaf having to put up with years of my cousins' doing it! On another note, why do you think Shute is annoying? He's not annoying, he's spunky! Or is spunky annoying to you? (growls and gives Shute a hug) I think it's cute. Cuter than tantrums. Shute: (smiling like he's embarrassed)
 Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 17, 2004 19:26 CST
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X_x Sly Zero, sly! Poor little Baku...I still think someone should crush baku...^_^; I'm cruel!
 Reviewed By: Raven haired saiyan  On: March 17, 2004 17:23 CST
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Yep, Zero snapped big time! It's a good thing that Baku escaped from the other ladybugs.
 Reviewed By: Green Devil [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 17, 2004 09:27 CST
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Lol! Stupid silly little Tallgeese. Did you really think Zero'd give you a lap dance? I feel so sorry for you... No wait, no I don't. XD! Yeah. Anyway, that was a great chapter! Glad Baku got away from those other ladybugs. Lol! I think Zero's finally lost it. Great fic! Write more soon! ^_^!
 Reviewed By: Black B Kirin [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 16, 2004 23:36 CST
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WAHAHAHAAHAHA! You had me going there for a second... Whew, good job Zero! I was smiling when I read that title.. 'cause I say that a lot! "You're invading my personal bubble. Out! Scram! Toodles!" ^-^ I think that revenge was justifiable. And the guy lady-bug was happy. *cocks head* I wonder what was it about Baku that drove the females nuts? *shrugs* Must be the red... he's just so red. Yeah... okay. *coughs* Lost my train of thought, gimme a second to board another.... *minutes pass* The train's late. *hours pass* Very late. *Days pass* Yay! Okay, here we go... keep writing! ^-^ I'm done.
 Reviewed By: Green Devil (too tired to log in -_-)  On: March 15, 2004 14:14 CST
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Lol! Run, Baku, run! You can do it! Lol! Tallgeese is such a perv. He deserves to be electrocuted. XD Hmm, I wonder if they really have the thing to turn Baku back... Great fic! Write more soon! ^_^!
 Reviewed By: Raven haired saiyan  On: March 14, 2004 13:59 CST
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0_0 This is gonna scar me for the rest of my life. In a good way though I think. Heh, our poor, poor, insane Baku and Zero. Tallgeese being a prev, think you got that from seeing him first appear. Someone needs to teach Zero to Beeotch punch him instead of slapping him. Got that idea from my friends when I got ticked off. ^^; And it works! What's Baku going to do now?
 Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 14, 2004 13:07 CST
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Sorry I told u bout the grasshopper threesome...It was...strange. Especially for an 9 year old.
 Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 14, 2004 13:04 CST
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Dat is true. He is the most perverted. Haha, poor Baku! I lurve torturing those I like!! XD ch2,3,4,5 are up for chibified! ^-^
 Reviewed By: Black B. Kirin  On: March 14, 2004 03:46 CST
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ZEEEROOOOO!! 0_0 Tallgeese, watta perv! Oh man, that was really funny though. XD Totally screwed, but so totally funny! My gosh... he makes me look innocent. >_< Poor Baku though... those ladybuggies are very forward! Run, Baku run! RUN, ZERO, RUN!!!
 Reviewed By: Raven haired saiyan  On: March 09, 2004 21:55 CST
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*Nods* True, true. ^^
 Reviewed By: Black B. Kirin  On: March 09, 2004 21:21 CST
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Why I oughtta-! *hugs paper flower* Never mind! ^-^ *still cuddeling flower* Apology accepted. Thanks again for the flower! How can you stay mad at such a nice person? As for the Dr. Pepper comment... Cool! =^-^= Dr. Pepper, makes the world taste a whole lot better!
 Reviewed By: Raven haired saiyan  On: March 09, 2004 20:27 CST
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SORRRRRRRRYYYYYYY! MY MIND JUST 'CLICKED'! I THINK YOU'RE RIGHT ABOUT THE COFFE! SOMETHING'S WRONG WITH IT! I'LL GO BACK TO DRINKING DP I SWEAR! Well, maybe not. JUST PLEASE DON'T KILL ME! I WAS BORED!
 Reviewed By: Black B. Kirin  On: March 09, 2004 18:50 CST
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What the- *nearly drowns before jumping up soaked to the bone* RAVEEEEEEEEN!! *huge vein throbbing* >_
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