| "Yu-Gi-Oh! Murder Mystery" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
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Title: nonbody-touchs-mai
Reviewed By: dr-fan/mai-lover On: May 20, 2009 09:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yah nonbody-tuchs-mai-do-ygounvise-kill-of-weelive&rx&isis&mairk-th ey-maust-diee
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Reviewed By: animaster_sonja [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 12:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
could you fix the alignment on the last chappie, please?
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Title: YAY!!!
Reviewed By: Ceribi Motou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 21:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Laugh my ass off, that was HILARIOUS. RA that was funny! *laughs some more* WOOOO okay. Now -- I think that you should kill Tea because nobody likes her, and then throw in Serenity and anyone else. Just not Joey. Or Seto. Or Mokuba. Or Yami/Bakura/Marik/Malik/Yugi, because they are REALLY funny. ("MY LITTLE BLUE EYES..." Laugh my ass off, that's SO priceless...) So yeah, awesome story, update!
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Reviewed By: animaster_sonja [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 05:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Pls update soon. Kill everyone off except the orig. center char. and their relatives. everyone else can be sent to hell.
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Reviewed By: Amy_Rose(not logged in yet) On: April 01, 2005 13:10 CST
Comment/Review:
Update Soon Plz Cuz This Is A Great Fic!
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Reviewed By: miko kit On: November 27, 2004 20:02 CST
Comment/Review:
Rebecca, Shadi, and *thinking* Mai i guess. The last one is kinda difficult. Great chappie.
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Reviewed By: lil' Yuki On: November 27, 2004 09:25 CST
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Rebecca, Duke, Shadi... *runs off to watch Saturday cartoons* @.@
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Reviewed By: Kurama'sFanGirl24 On: November 17, 2004 16:39 CST
Comment/Review:
Everyone kills off Tea.But I hate her so I don't really care,but if you do kill her when the murderer stab her then,have Tea rant about friendship and stuff like that then the murderer freaks out(either from the speech or because he thought she was dead)and starts stabing her over,and over repeatedly.but,it would be original to keep her on the alive list...Make fun of the way Yami when he say "It's time to D-d-d-d-d-d-d-duel!!!"Those are just suggestions,you don't have to use them though.Plesase update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: peachgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 16:18 CST
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wait *rereading chapter* Ooh... Okay I'll choose three!I choose the pathetic love triangle to die! (Tristan, Duke, Serenity) I honestly have nothing against them but it would be cool if they all died together. I have a weird sense of humor!
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Title: DESTROY! mwahahahahahaha...
Reviewed By: lil' Yuki On: November 10, 2004 15:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Ok, murder Johnson (then it will be the big zero...), Weevil Underpants (rotfl), and either Duke or Tristan. They annoy me so badly... (KILL THEM NOW...) *wrote review while on sugar* WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! lol
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Reviewed By: miko (Tabitha) On: November 09, 2004 19:59 CST
Comment/Review:
this time the votes go to johnson, weevil, and tristan. and it was another great chappie.
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Reviewed By: peachgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 19:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Away with them all! Wait no... yes ALL OF THEM! ... or Tristan. I really don't care about OOCness 'cuz that's what makes stories fun!
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Title: your story
Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 07:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey me again, again, your story rocks, all off them do. I love to read that one story you talked about, about your own life. If you still want to you can send it to paniwi@hotmail.com thanks already, I'm sure it's good
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Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 06:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kill every non-main person for all I care, but be original and don't kill Tea/Anzu. I rather see Noah squirm. keep updating and heed my words, or taste my revenge. FOR I AM THE ALMIGHTY uuh, no one in particular. *edges away whistling*
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Reviewed By: paralleltodarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 16:40 CST
Comment/Review:
whoops... rex instead of weevil... i forgot... sorry!
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