| "The Man of Her Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: ShikonbabyJK On: August 18, 2008 11:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story its so cute with the boys fight over Kagome. Inuyasha can't keep his eye or lips to himslef. But most importantly how Kagome isn't just taking what Inuyasha's mess. Can't wait to read some of your other stories.
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Reviewed By: ShikonbabyJK On: June 06, 2008 12:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the story and thought you ended in a cute way. She chapters were short, but they were to the point I like that about the story. How you make a sequel that tells if he tells her the truth and how she deals with it if not I'll read your other stories and comment on them. Keep up the good work.
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Title: whoa
Reviewed By: lil babe0206 On: November 14, 2007 20:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok ur story is asome!!!! i just finished reading chapie 23 hmm i wonder wat hapen nex. wel i wanna go read the nex chp seya. P.S if u ask abot the name my cuz made it up for my runescape acont sooooo i juz use for things lik thiz now ( i no hes such a hentai ( not that he likz me or anething (dont get tha idea)ok) wel bye
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Reviewed By: HOHOHOHOHOHOHO On: March 07, 2007 19:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was nice but you left in an weird place?
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Reviewed By: Mad-4-Manga On: March 03, 2005 17:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave you an overall 8 because...you didn't really stick to any one theme or idea for very long...it was kind of frustrating...BUT I LOVED IT! So you got a 9 for enjoyment.... You got a 9 for spelling/grammar because you would constantly type one word and the first letter of the next word would be attached to the previous...so you got a 9. Style of writing?....Like I said before...you didn't stick to any one theme...you kind of skipped from one idea to another... example: You never really elaborated on the school experience which at first seemed very important...then there was the whole "coma" thing... and you never elaborated on what the two of them felt....you could have made this SO MUCH LONGER!!! But you only went like half way with it. I gave you a 10 for originality b/c of my overall impression of your ideas throughout the story! I thought that at first when kagome had been taken it was Inu. Then I thought it was Naraku..then I find that it's really Sesshy! What a shcoker! Also....you never really elaborated about Sango and Miroku..how did they get outside making out? And what was that blue light that bid Kag. come back inside? Gotta go!
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Reviewed By: Mad-4-Manga On: March 03, 2005 16:20 CST
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YO! LOVED YOUR FIC!!!!! IT WAS AWESOME AND STUFF!!!! But..... you redid your fic... why? You know me! I am that person you emailed the hyper to this website!!! ...We were talking about name misspellings...... Really interesting....and of course Kikyo is gonna side with the evil guy, ne?
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Title: awsome
Reviewed By: Rays lil cuz On: November 30, 2004 17:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The two peeps I hate dead! YAY! YAY! YAY! I love Kouga and sesshoumaru died! It is so awsome! U go girl!
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Title: last chapter
Reviewed By: inuyashaalltheway On: November 07, 2004 03:01 CST
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i like your story but i was a bit confuse at the end od chapter 25.Is it your last chapter like the end of the whole story.i hope not.i really like it.
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Reviewed By: Kagome-chan2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 14:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story and i think you should write more. Maybe add a lemon, and While "Mating" kagome becomes half-demon like Inuyasha since they are the ones 'mating'.... Anyways, update soon!
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Reviewed By: MC On: October 28, 2004 21:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Srry i haven't been able to review, BUT please wrtite another chapter. (do this for all your fans!!!) MC
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Title: jhjh
Reviewed By: jjhtrtrtre On: October 19, 2004 15:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
dun dun dun
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Title: ur my friend
Reviewed By: Haylee On: October 18, 2004 21:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
i loved this story it was awsome. i hope you find it in ur angel side to write another chap. Oh and late happy b-day. sry for not getting u a present. ill have to get one for u even if it is late. i mean its the thought that counts right. right. *crickets are being heard* ok. see u at school
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Reviewed By: Mc On: October 10, 2004 15:07 CDT
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LOL! its Mc you biggest fan ever!!!! write on, Write on, Mc
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Reviewed By: Mandy_LOL On: September 29, 2004 15:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its Ok Just make it LONGER!!!!! ^_^
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Title: ttr
Reviewed By: ttr On: September 27, 2004 20:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
lol
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