| "MiNd GaMeS" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
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Title: Your Story
Reviewed By: BbyChick [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 13:17 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
This story is very nice. But the plot seems to be moving along too quickly. I understand where you are oing with this but you need to slow it down a liitle. i gave this story an originality/creattivity of six because it really isn't that original but your characters and everything are quite creative. Anyway, you should REALLY work on slowing down or else this story is gonna be really sucky. no offense intended. I'm just trying to help you out. Keep up the nice work
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Reviewed By: crux On: August 04, 2004 19:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please Update!!!!
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Reviewed By: 65498 On: August 02, 2004 17:49 EDT
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Your story is very cute. It has me hooked. Please oh please update. please :)
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Reviewed By: Star-brella [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 20:52 EDT
Comment/Review:
OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!! BEST STORY EVER~!!!!! EKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK, YOU JUST HAVE TO UPDATE SOON! I LOVE THE IDEA OF IT AND I LOVE THE WHY YOU'VE WRITTEN IT!!! pLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE SOON ::WATERLY PUPPY DOG EYES:: PLZZZZZ AND IF YOU DON'T MIND CAN I ASK YOU TO SEND ME THE LEMON IN THIS STORY?! HERE'S MY EMAIL: starshine015@hotmail.com thanks a bunch!!! ^_^ i love you story so update asap!!!!
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Title: MinD Games
Reviewed By: chinoodin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 18:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
add the lime part at that one chapter continue with it
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Reviewed By: Rownz On: June 06, 2004 02:07 EDT
Comment/Review:
"Update Soon!!!"
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Reviewed By: The_Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 15:09 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this is so far one of my favorite stories that I have read so far. Can't wait to see what Vegeta said to Brocco. I wonder if he actually speaks English, but was just pretending not to. That would be really funny because of what she said to Ackbar. I can't wait to see the updates.
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Title: Loven it
Reviewed By: Iss_a_dora On: May 16, 2004 03:38 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can't wait for more.....whats did vegeta say to brocco in chapter ten???
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Reviewed By: fireice *too lazy to sign in* On: May 08, 2004 15:57 EDT
Comment/Review:
I love it I love it I love it!!!!! please update soon. I wanna know what's gonna happen.
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Reviewed By: fireice*too lazy to sign in* On: May 08, 2004 15:56 EDT
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Reviewed By: Evrlstng On: April 18, 2004 22:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gr8 job! can't wait til the next chapter
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Reviewed By: me On: April 18, 2004 18:14 EDT
Comment/Review:
definitely skipped chapter 9
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Reviewed By: FLAMINGCATDEMON01 On: April 14, 2004 22:25 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWSOME please finish the story cause i cant go on with out finishing it
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Title: MIND GAME
Reviewed By: ccfleursdelys On: April 02, 2004 03:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like your story and wait impatiently for the next chapter update ASAP please
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Reviewed By: Evrlstng On: March 20, 2004 22:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gr8 work so far i like how different this fic is from others~
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