| "Brother My Brother" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Title: good ^^
Reviewed By: Truth On: May 03, 2005 18:36 CDT
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beutiful ^^ Please keep going! You have quite the way with words
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Reviewed By: Spikerix (aka Inuchan80) On: April 14, 2005 01:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story, I just finished read it the same day you posted on the IYED list, the angst is lovely and plot's so hooking than I'm looking forward to see more of it. Please update if you not gave up on this already... and if you did please let know here or in said list, so me and who knows how much others won't wait in vain. Kisses from the bottom of the world, Argentina.
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Reviewed By: Fuyumiko Arashi On: October 30, 2004 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, great chapater; 'Kagome' turning out to be Naraku, Kanna meeting Sesshoumaru. The words weaved to create this tale is surely great and I wish to read more of it. Please update as inspiration leads you.
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Reviewed By: twilightfornow On: October 29, 2004 21:41 CDT
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awsome! This chapter was fantastic I can't wait for the next one. Keep it going!
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Reviewed By: queenserena(It's me!) On: October 29, 2004 18:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*jumps up and down*YAAHHH!!!!!!/Rin:*falls over*...You've made Rebekuka-san mad.../*points finger*HOW DARE YOU DO THAT TO INU AND FLUFFY! HOW DARE YOU!/Rin:*sweatdrops*Ignore her, she had pizza, so she's completely hyper./*pouts**sniff*YOU'RE SO MEAN!*brawls*
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Reviewed By: O_O what??? On: October 13, 2004 21:05 CDT
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will... will the dead come back?!!?!?!?!?!?! Sesshomaru will get his sword back right?!
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Reviewed By: twightlight On: October 13, 2004 21:03 CDT
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hot(cool, im in a interesting mood), keep going
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Reviewed By: queenserena(again, who else?) On: September 28, 2004 18:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww!/Rin:KAWAII!
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Reviewed By: queenserena12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 16:49 CDT
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*whips away a tear*/Rin:...Rin...RIN IS DEAD!*gets pounded on back of head*/I'M MOURNING OVER YOU TOO YOU MORON!/Rin:Oh...Poor Sango-chan!
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Reviewed By: insaneAUTHORESS (not logged in) On: May 27, 2004 20:54 CDT
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yay an update! it was good cuz inu needed sess and now Sess needs Inu! Keep it up and i look forward to your much welcomed updates!
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Reviewed By: F_D_C2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 06:09 CDT
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I love this story. But they all died -_- I thought Miroku would live at least.. owell. I love it so far, really sad and angsty, hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 22:10 CDT
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this is so great! Sad but great! And the good thing is they still seem in character! Inuyasha's adorable though i wonder if his aditude ull pick back up in upon waking! Please update soon! I beg of thee i can't wait to see how the waking turns out!
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarustruluv [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 01:05 CDT
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I like the story very much. It's a major tear-jerker and one that I will have to keep in mind whenever I know I need to cry. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2004 22:04 CDT
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-_- great they ALL die! And stories normally end with a happy ending how do i not see that coming :P!? And one thing to say: SESSHOMARU GET YOUR DAMN LAZY ASS BACK THERE! cough cough heh heh... Well keep it up i want to see Sesshomaru back to his brotherly love thing. Or he should go find Rin's body (was she murdered?) and Jakens (i love that lil guy). Well keep it up and i look forward to the new chapter, though i do think you should make the chapters longer. I mean this was over in no time.
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Reviewed By: Aitu again On: April 28, 2004 22:25 CDT
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awwww, still sad, but still good. keep it up
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