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Reviewed By: guerro On: June 28, 2004 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really like it please update it as soon as possible i want to know what happens next
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Title: helllllooooo???
Reviewed By: ~JuSt-An_OuTcAsT~ [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 10:56 CDT
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Where are you update! -wacks with stick-
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Title: chapter 12
Reviewed By: ~JuSt-An_OuTcAsT~ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 17:53 CDT
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nice chappie...i can see we a building up to something exciting..and maybe some juicy stuff?? hee hee...write more soon i'll email you ;)
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Title: Chapter 11
Reviewed By: ~JuSt-An_OuTcAsT~ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 13:19 CDT
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This chapter was interesting but it was toned down and bit...I know that some really exciting stuff is going to happen soon keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: VegetandAru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 16:02 CDT
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Wow this is so cool. I kinda like it and I normally don't like het so that is a HUGE compliment. Update soon please. I wasn't expecting it to be dr Gero, so thayt's kinda cool like. Gotta go bookmark this page now so yaa... bye bye, keep writing
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Reviewed By: AAAGGGHHH-RUN AWAY On: April 16, 2004 15:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.K i'm writing a review so i expect another excellent update!!!! this story is very different from the other highschool fics i've read and i think i read in one story that Dr Briefs name was Teddy and in others Trunks. Just thought that might help:) So plez i want more story!!!!!
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Title: chapter 11
Reviewed By: ~JuSt-An_OuTcAsT~ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 07:47 CDT
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Wow...you know something first i am addicted to your fic...becuase i saw that you updated and went to read it before school..that is kind of sad, you think? This awas a very nice chapter! i am looking up on good jpop music and i had a suggestion so i will get on it after school today...by the way it is still kind of a mystery..what exactly was that article about? I know it certainly revealed all...Great chappie! I hope this review shows up..if you don't see the reviews try the refresh button also..it works for me on your chapters sometimes when i can't see them... ~Jao
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Title: chapper 10
Reviewed By: ~JuSt-An_OuTcAsT~ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 05:33 CDT
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okay..that wasn't really fair...*cries* Just when it was getting good man! *gets sad* Write more this on was really good! oh btw I am going to look up some lyrics right now so i will email you with some nice ones! (i hope) ~Jao
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Title: new chappie
Reviewed By: ~JuSt-An_OuTcAsT~ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 09:07 CDT
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I got kind of confused in this chapter...Since when does vegeta want a record deal?? This is interesting nonetheless..I recommend some Jpop for him to sing! I will look up some lyrics for you if ya want, but right now i am at school...hehehe..i have no life...One suggestion, if you use microsoft word, do a spelling and grammar check to make usre those typos don't stay. Peace, Jao
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Title: new chapter
Reviewed By: ~JuSt-An_OuTcAsT~ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2004 00:21 CST
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This new chapter was better thant he last, though i thought the chapter needed to be there. I hope you post a new chapter soon i am very curious. Oh..uh...what exactly were vegeta and bulma doing in english...? I got some odd ideas there! Write more! Jao~
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Reviewed By: ~JuSt-An_OuTcAsT~ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 15:24 CST
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Reviewed By: ~JuSt-An_OuTcAsT~ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 15:23 CST
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You= write more! i have to tell you that most high school fics are cliche, but i like this one. see, OOCness is the key to making a real story good ^_^ write more it is nice!
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Reviewed By: Chiku On: March 13, 2004 17:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really starting to like this story. It really is one of the original B/V stories around. Please keep on the good work.
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Reviewed By: ~JuSt-An_OuTcAsT~ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 21:34 CST
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Wow..i have not read one of these in a long time, and i am sad to say i am HOOKED. PLEASE write MORE!!!! ~Peace~
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Reviewed By: ~JuSt-An_OuTcAsT~ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 21:03 CST
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I like this fic so far, and i think it has some originality. I want you to keep writing it please! But i must suggest indenting each time a different person says something, becuase it makes it not slur all together, you know? ~Peace~
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