| "Did it hurt when you fell from the heavens?" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: Viandra [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 15:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have so far enjoyed your story. It is really fun. Poor Tsusuki, I was so happy that you made Hisoka rescue him. Go on writing, I can`t wait for another chapter to come up. Greetings, Viandra P.S.: I have recently been playing Soul Reaver on my playstation and there are creatures in it that resemble your Slowaks. They are called "Sluags" or something like that. Maybe you played that game too?
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Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 23:38 CDT
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Painting pictures of his victums is something I would expect of evil Muraki. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: firgodes7 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 12:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Glad that you updated!!!! Well now let's see hoe this story is going to go hmmmm... Its getting very interesting now can't wait to see what will happen next.
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Reviewed By: firgodes7 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2004 17:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is really coming along very well. Hope to see you update really soon.
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Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2004 23:54 CST
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Another good chapter. Looking forward to Tsuzuki's escape and who may offer him assistance.
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Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 07:05 CST
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Great chapter. Loved the explanation of Muraki's wierd eye and the Tsusuki torture.
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Reviewed By: lothlaide On: March 19, 2004 05:41 CST
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Poor tsuzuki-chan. Muraki is such a git!!
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