"Did it hurt when you fell from the heavens?" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: Fireangel3571 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2004 00:54 CDT Comment/Review: WOW! You need to update, like, wow, I love this story, I really, really want Hisoka to be okay! I want him to maybe be an angel, or something, just a happily ever after!
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Title: Sapadu Reviewed By: Sapadu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 06:55 CDT Comment/Review: Yes, I know what happens next: Hisoka dies, becomes an angel and goes to heaven with Tsuzuki, while Tatsumi kicks Beelzebub's ass back into hell.
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Reviewed By: celtic creature On: August 07, 2004 21:55 CDT Comment/Review: Oh please please please please pleeeeaaaaassssseeeeee keep going. I love this fic too dearly for it to be abandoned.
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Title: ....... Reviewed By: shuichi09 On: August 07, 2004 14:14 CDT Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OKKKKK,ummm lets see here,this is a realy good fic,its got everything that i love angust,love,blood,ect ect,welp all i can say is SPELL and CHECK,and OOC much on the muraki at points x.x;the whole hijiri muraki thing is like the first that iv eer seen so 10 on enjoyment!^^and of course originality is a 9,ONLY because if its not an origanal story,then its not origianl is it?,but that may or may n ot make sence to u,othewise i give it a 10^^ see u soooonnnnn -waves- shuichi
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Reviewed By: lil_yapper On: August 03, 2004 17:56 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: what!!!!!! how can you even think about stopping the story!!!i luv this fic, it's so cute...and your thinking about stopping it...i don't think so, you can stop it when the story ends!this is too good of a fic to stop...please
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Reviewed By: Forte Galaxy Angel On: June 10, 2004 22:18 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Please update as soon as possible!!! I can't wait to read what's gonna happen next! Oh, I don't mind the grammatical errors...who does anyway? ^_^ I'll be back to check for updates!
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Title: wow Reviewed By: pink vamp2 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 20:00 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love u sooooooo much! 4 writing this fic!!! i love tzusuki and muraki and hisoka and i feel so sorry 4 poor watari! muraki is so evil yet soo hot! & WHAT R U WAITING FOR? WRITE YAOI NOW! DISCRIPTIVENESS TO PLEASE??
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Reviewed By: firgodes7 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2004 12:01 CDT Comment/Review: Poor Shiro and hisoka.....Great chapter your sorry just gets better with every chapter that you post. Hope to see another chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: Viandra [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 15:15 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I have so far enjoyed your story. It is really fun. Poor Tsusuki, I was so happy that you made Hisoka rescue him. Go on writing, I can`t wait for another chapter to come up. Greetings, Viandra P.S.: I have recently been playing Soul Reaver on my playstation and there are creatures in it that resemble your Slowaks. They are called "Sluags" or something like that. Maybe you played that game too?
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Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 23:38 CDT Comment/Review: Painting pictures of his victums is something I would expect of evil Muraki. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: firgodes7 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 12:11 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Glad that you updated!!!! Well now let's see hoe this story is going to go hmmmm... Its getting very interesting now can't wait to see what will happen next.
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Reviewed By: firgodes7 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2004 17:00 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: It is really coming along very well. Hope to see you update really soon.
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Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2004 23:54 CST Comment/Review: Another good chapter. Looking forward to Tsuzuki's escape and who may offer him assistance.
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Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 07:05 CST Comment/Review: Great chapter. Loved the explanation of Muraki's wierd eye and the Tsusuki torture.
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Reviewed By: lothlaide On: March 19, 2004 05:41 CST Comment/Review: Poor tsuzuki-chan. Muraki is such a git!!
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