| "Behind Blue Eyes" Reviews/Comments [ 98 ] |
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Reviewed By: LEEMAX^_^ On: September 22, 2005 20:43 CDT
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I am so glad that you updated. I have been out of the fic world for a while. I am expecting another child in the next two months. I have been so busy in RLF. I finally have time now that I am getting things set. I can not wait to see what Hilde has to say for the abuse and etc. I am certain that CPS must have already contacted her since it would be priority since it is not a assumption but as fact. I wonder what she is going to say to Heero and if Duo is going to stick up for Heero. Will Duo confess what she has done to their son in front of all. If so, will you be making Heero come out of some of the sadness in order to help protect the ones he loves?
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Reviewed By: aynia (who's too lazy to sign in) On: September 22, 2005 16:12 CDT
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one day after my birthday ^^ thanks for updating!
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Reviewed By: Tsen On: September 22, 2005 15:00 CDT
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TOTALLY EVIL CLIFFIE! *pout* love the story though.
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Reviewed By: Becca23 On: September 22, 2005 12:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the premise, but the devolopmente is rushed, facts are not explained, Duo is complete asshole without justification and although I enjoy a sensitive Heero, this one is too girly and weak. The dialogs could be better arranjed and you could try to put a little more soul into the characterization, this is very shallow but I've seen worst. You may think I'm totally flaming you, but that's not the case, I'm actually hoping you improve in your writing because as I said, I liked the premise of this story.
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Title: UUUMMMM?????
Reviewed By: Birdy666 On: August 30, 2005 20:40 CDT
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Not to be pushy but (peeks around at all the other people waiting for and update) can we have some more please soon I keep checking back with baited breath hopeing against all hope that a new chapter will be looking back at me from my monitor screen I've already reread this story again while waiting its so good so hope you update soon (HEAVES A BIG SIGH!!!!!!).
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Reviewed By: lil sesshomarus girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 23:27 CDT
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PLEASE add more I got know know if Duo can punch him harder then he could. and if lil camyrn can get Duo and Heero to talk the problem out.
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Reviewed By: WatcherWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 04:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is wonderful. Please update soon.
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Title: mischakitsune456@yahoo.com email me if you want ^_~
Reviewed By: MischaKitsune On: July 26, 2005 06:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm going to follow the advice since this is my first review on the site. Your style of writing keeps my attention incredibly well. I love it. ^_^ The spelling and grammar really could use some work, but it's definitely not the worst I've seen so I'm giving it a 6. The originality...Well, it's really a bunch of things that I love all being thrown into one, so it's creative and yet not. The enjoyment factor...OMG! I'm dying to read the next chapter! I swear, reviewing is KILLLING ME! XD This is a very, very, very good and entertaining story. Unfortunately, I have to give it an 8. ^_^ I've read things that make your story pale by comparison, but I've read things that make your story look like the best piece of work on the planet. ^_^ All of them fanfics, so you don't have to worry about being compared to the big dogs. I love Heero-chan! I was always said that he had tan skin because I love pale people and though he looks good tan he'd look so good pale, too! I really enjoy Cameron, even though I personally don't feel a strong connection to or care for children. I feel that Hilde was out of character, but that's only because I really didn't have a problem with her. In fact, I really liked her. I like Duo/Heero better, but I don't mind Duo/Hilde. XD I saw the show before I knew what yaoi was. Or anime, for that matter. OMG! I was at that A-kon! I was only going with friends and didn't know that was Duo! I'm so sad cause of that. Okay, I'll stop talking now. Excellent chapter! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: aynia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 14:02 CDT
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Wow, this meeting was quite tense! It seems Heero has to open up a bit (more) but I'm sure Cam-chan will gladly help his tenshi with that. ^^ And one thing is for sure, those ex-Gundam pilots are a lot braver than me - they don't even hesitate to take a shower then there's a thunderstorm outside - I know it should be save to do so but well, I'm not that fond of thunderstorms and taking risks.. ^^
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 12:09 CDT
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Hey! I started reading this a while back when there wasn't as many chaps. It'll take me a long time to catch up. Duo is such an ass from what I remember of this. Will he get back with Heero?
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Title: All Right!!
Reviewed By: birdy666 On: June 24, 2005 08:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First time checking back since the 5 month gap and find three new chapters, glad to see this fic is still going I love the Camron character. I know that most people are probably saying oh my god Heero is so ooc but the new softness can be a good thing for a nurturing parent I've seen it work in other stories, but he did need just a little bit of toughing up so that was ok. I hope he is going to apologize to Sally he was a major bastard there to her. I also thought that the scene with Duo at the end was priceless got a good chuckle out of that one. The look that must have been on Heero face at being treated like a kid throwing a tantrum (heh-snort) priceless just priceless. So keep up the good work and update soon can not hardly wait to read more and see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: gaelan On: June 09, 2005 08:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the final scene is really surprising. Heero has become quite a bastard but that's okay. i don't think that i would have written it any different if it were me. umm... still like the kid. hope you continue building his character up. and don't forget to keep toughening Heero up. that's all for now i think. thanks, and please update as soon as possible. please,please,please,please (a hundred times.)
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Reviewed By: Jade1154 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 14:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAAAAYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!! i lover this chapter you were right it turned out wonderfly!!! i cant wait too see the next update!!!
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Reviewed By: Crazeme On: May 31, 2005 10:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story. The idea of Duo having a son is too cute. Please continue, I can hardly wait to see what you come up with next.
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Title: fujinakaheero (not signed in)
Reviewed By: fujinakaheero [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 16:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello!!! I ish back to review yet again =D How are you? Live been treating you well? Well I hope so, I'm glad you got around to updating again, I was wondering when you would update this story again and I was waiting patiently, this was such a sad chapter, even though everyone was getting up in each other's faces, it was sad because there was so much hurt that it just kept building up into angry, aww soo sad.... v.v but I'm just glad to finally see how it went, though I didn't expect Heero to all of a sudden go to Cam and hug him, I thought he was just gonna leave like he said he would. Anyways, I should stop, my review is starting to get long, so I shall wait again. Great story, I must say it again because it's the truth ^.^ Anyways, talk to you in the next review I giva ya. Ja Ne! Fujinakaheero ((^.^)) P.S. perfect 10, you deserve it =D
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