| "You and Kai" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lone Sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 15:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Eh.. short? Hehe
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Reviewed By: Silverkitsune202 (Not logged in) On: May 07, 2004 19:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's okay! ^_^ One time I didn't update at all for about 3 or 4 months. I had some seriously ticked off readers then! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 09:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
I hate when authers do this they insert them selves into the story and make them stornger tahn anyone else!!!!
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Reviewed By: Raven_chan On: April 17, 2004 15:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAHOOOOOOOOOOO you finally updated!
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Reviewed By: dark_fire_demon19 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 10:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was kewl!!! i luv ur fan fic!! i think u should go out w/ kurama cuz ur both kitsunes!!
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Title: YEA!!!
Reviewed By: Raven_chan On: April 08, 2004 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea!! im so glad you updated...*blushes slightly* ive been checking on the story ever sence april 5....you should make Hiei fall for you...heheheh that is if you like hiei
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Title: complant
Reviewed By: Kitsune gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 22:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You see you make the other weakiling compared to you. You have many forms and other crap. I thinkthats my biggest complant of your story
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Title: PLEASE KEEP GOING!!
Reviewed By: Raven_Chan On: April 06, 2004 18:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE DONT STOP...sniff sniff....WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA if you do then then....well i cant think of any thing to do but i do want you to keep writing!
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