| "You and Kai" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inuhime6666 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 13:57 CDT
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it is good ...please try to update soon...well my char is kurai...names norma (it sounds to boring)...and does kendo,fencing,martail arts count...i'm really not into anything else that i could remember at the moment...i'm a shadow demon...FUN!!!...random saying...!!!Ja Ne!!!X__x
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Title: Love It
Reviewed By: Hieis_girl 21190 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 17:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like Basketball, I'm a fire demon,and I love this fic. please update soon. ANYWAY, Please continue soon and please check out "Hiei and Me" by Hieis_girl21190 and tell me what you think!!
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Reviewed By: Moon Maiden [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 17:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like your story. Please update. You know, I'm on a softball team too.
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Reviewed By: kuroikage27 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 16:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
update soon
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Reviewed By: kuroikage27 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 16:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
update soon
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Title: Oops, guess I forgot to review
Reviewed By: Blarghness! On: May 18, 2004 08:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
You: Gah! Why are those evil demons killing me????!!!! Hakuo: Oh yeah, I guess I forgot to tell you...
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Reviewed By: HiEi LoVer On: May 09, 2004 22:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
love the story please update soon! sorry bout the less time u have...dat does suk....o well update soon!
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Reviewed By: Lone Sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 15:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Eh.. short? Hehe
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Reviewed By: Silverkitsune202 (Not logged in) On: May 07, 2004 19:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's okay! ^_^ One time I didn't update at all for about 3 or 4 months. I had some seriously ticked off readers then! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 09:09 CDT
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I hate when authers do this they insert them selves into the story and make them stornger tahn anyone else!!!!
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Reviewed By: Raven_chan On: April 17, 2004 15:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAHOOOOOOOOOOO you finally updated!
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Reviewed By: dark_fire_demon19 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 10:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was kewl!!! i luv ur fan fic!! i think u should go out w/ kurama cuz ur both kitsunes!!
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Title: YEA!!!
Reviewed By: Raven_chan On: April 08, 2004 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea!! im so glad you updated...*blushes slightly* ive been checking on the story ever sence april 5....you should make Hiei fall for you...heheheh that is if you like hiei
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Title: complant
Reviewed By: Kitsune gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 22:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You see you make the other weakiling compared to you. You have many forms and other crap. I thinkthats my biggest complant of your story
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Title: PLEASE KEEP GOING!!
Reviewed By: Raven_Chan On: April 06, 2004 18:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE DONT STOP...sniff sniff....WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA if you do then then....well i cant think of any thing to do but i do want you to keep writing!
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