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Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 03:14 CDT
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Yoh! I just got back from A-kon! Great chapter! So that's who that guy was, but now there's another mysterious guy?! Ahh! Hm..? So, I wonder what they want with Sashi..? Oh! Yay! Malik's coming back! So, what role will he play in the fic, I wonder. And didn't Ishizu (Isis) mention something about going back to Domino for an actual reason? Hmmm? Is there so giant ass conspiracy going on?! Sashi's involved right? Ooh, I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens!! Keep going, yo! It's great!
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Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 19:35 CDT
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...There's no escaping this, huh? As soon as I'm done with this, I'll go to typing chappie number 6 of WTDC. Anyways, I liked this chapter a lot! ^_^ I wanna know what happens so badly! But I shouldn't bug you to update 'cause I'm not too good about it myself... ^_^; So, with that done, the only thing left to say is The stroy so far is awesome! ^_^ ...I'll get to typing now...
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Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 17:54 CDT
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Oi! This fic's really good! I really wanna know what happens! Sooo, Malik and Isis are on their way back to Domino, right? Hey.. Wait... If Marik ends up with Sashi (who is a very interesting character, by the way), who is Malik gonna end up with?! Oh, no! He's not gonna be all alone is he?! Aww... Poor Malik... Then again... Does Malik even like Marik? 'Cause, well... Marik /was/ a jerk to Malik, no da, heh. Ah! And the pairing are great so far! I'm assuming that Bakura and Ryou are together, right? Heh, man they are kick ass. Ah! And Jounouchi and Kaiba is great too! Ooh! I can't wait to see what heppens next! Oh! And who was that mysterious guy that asked to speak with Shashi back when she was still in the body of the two year old? Hm..? And will Marik try to get the rod back? And what about Sashi and Kaiba?! Aren't they like father and daughter..... Wait...... Dosen't that mean, that acording to your fic's logic.... Yami and Seto are brothers?!?! *mind goes poof* Ehh??? Oh! I wanna know what's gonna happen!!!! Keep going! This is great!
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Title: Sakuras are that pretty!
Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 16:52 CDT
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Yes, must love the Sakura trees. Aren't they so awesome when they've been in bloom for a bit and the petals cover the doorstep and blow around in the wind? I love it! ^_^ Anyways, to the point of this whole review, I thought it was AWESOME! I was laughing so much! Just gotta love a frustrated Atemu! And an adorably innocent Yugi! And a completely insane Marik! And a totally reckless Jou! And a kawaii scared Mokie! AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!! You must update soon! ...Or I will be cursed with more writer's block!
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Reviewed By: divastarz63 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 15:22 CDT
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One more thing. U really like Marik dontcha? If u dont ILL take him. If u do, well i wish u good luck. Bye!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: divastarz002 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 15:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! This is great! Plz update soon!
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Title: Randomness!
Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2004 17:06 CDT
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Yay! Amusement parks can be so much fun! Especially when you're an anime cahracter and anyhting can happen! Like Mariks falling from the sky! ^_~ This was so hysterical, I almost rolled over my game of clock solitare and messed it up! Anyways, can't wait for mroe to happen between Sashi and Marik, Yugi and Atemu, and Ryou and Bakura! (save best for last! ^_~) UPDATE SOON! And I'll try to update mine!
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Reviewed By: Rikainiel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 19:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good fic!! Update it again soon!!! ^_^
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Title: Yay!!!!! ^_^
Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 21:26 CDT
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Did you know I could pick out the parts you copied from the sheet directly? Oh well, it's still awesome! I like the way you used to tell the Egyptian past; I was thinking something like that when you told me it'd be boring. I know what's going to happen with Marik in chapter 5! I helped think of that too! ^_^ Anyways, update soon!
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Reviewed By: TheKirbyKid [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 19:52 CDT
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Hi again. This chapter was even better! I'm not sure what you did, but I found the writing style more interesting. Keep it going! Maybe you can think of something cool for Sashi to do now that she's a big kid. Is she going to eat the rest of that chocolate? o.o
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Reviewed By: TheKirbyKid [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 14:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whee. I don't really know anything about YGO, but it's still cool. ^^; The Sashi bit is interesting. I would have apple juice too, but it makes me go to the bathroom. I've never seen Egyptian spirits and such ride motorcycles. That would be spiffy.
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Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 20:48 CST
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Yay! Another chappie! I was so busy that I forgot when I got the e-mail! But I know chappie number 3 is waiting on me so sorry all you people who want to read more! And Saki, I'm typing it as you're reading this!
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Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 20:27 CST
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^_^ I already read this part... But it's still really good! You must post the second chapter! Oh, but you changed a few things, so you can tell I liked it so much I read it again! ^_^ I just love your YGO fics! And again, CONTINUE!!!! And don't leave it your locker like the past 3 times!
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Reviewed By: KaoriLindsayBlack [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 19:20 CST
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I love it can you read my fanfic "I'm sorry"
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Reviewed By: Kirei [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 20:17 CST
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I liked it! The Seto and Jou pairing is soo cute! I love it!
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