| "In Your Arms" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Title: Sakura Samora
Reviewed By: Sakura Samora [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2007 12:58 CDT
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OMG i loved it soo much, i kinda want you to continue it with what happens with kouga and kikyo and maybe the future but it's really good this way as well.
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Reviewed By: cris004u [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 22:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And you said you weren't that good... I loved the way you made this lemonade. Just enough sugar to make it sweeter then a powerpuff girl. Ah... I wish I could write lemonade like that *teehee* Good Job.
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Reviewed By: Breezie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 15:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was beautifully writing story. It was so romantic from both male declaring their love to Kogome made me blush. Thank you for sharing this story to us I loved it!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune Tenshin On: December 30, 2006 14:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have such a talented way of writing. I enjoyed this story so much. The characters personallities were closer to the mark than most fanfics that I've read. I'm probably not going to find another one like this again. I really had hopped for a continuation to this...but that's your call I guess ^-^ Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: angel_of_music_dd [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 19:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved reading it. I liked the way you expose the weak side of Inuyasha lol.
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2005 02:57 CDT
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Short ans sweet. I like it.
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Reviewed By: Yokunama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2005 12:54 CDT
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Very Interesting... Keep up the good work.
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Title: Washuu Ogami
Reviewed By: Washuu Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 15:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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::fans herself:: Grrrreat love scene!! You intertwine both their profound bond and the intimate details Thanks for another enjoyable story! Enjoyed the idea of a specific, ritualistic chant. Interesting that you had him acknowledge--how nothing less tempestuous than the mating fever to get him to speak of his eschewed lineage aloud? (not that it ever did the poor kid anything but ill during his abused formative years,*WAHHH!!!). Could almost feel sorry for Kouga,actually, do--like Inuyasha, he'd gone from viewing our beloved Kagome as a "shard detector" to seeming to cherish her for her sterling traits.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 02:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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you did a great job here, with the plot of the story and the portrayal of the characters. i do feel bad for Kouga (its kind of like houjo when you know that they will just never learn) but hey, he deserved it. he should have learned. great character dispostions and motivations. you really captured each of the characters personailties to a T. keep up the good writting.
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Reviewed By: Thornwitch On: October 19, 2004 09:30 CDT
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Poor Koga. He kinda deserved it for cheating on Ayame and and mostly wanting Kagome because of his rivalry with dog-boy, though.
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Reviewed By: YoukaiNMe [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 03:47 CDT
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Pretty good one-shot.. Hated seeing Kouga hurt though..
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Title: SORRY!!!
Reviewed By: Neko Valor [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 19:44 CDT
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I'm so sorry I just realised that this is the wrong story...please please please forgive me!!!! sorry.
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Reviewed By: Neko Valor [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've only gotten a chance to read the first chapter. Cuz...you've neglected to update this story on FanFiction Sanctuary...oh well. I'm more interested in reading this now that I have access to it than getting mad at you for not updating the other site. But just in case some others from the site don't know about this one would be kind enough to make a note and let them know that they can also read it here? I'm just asking. Now that all that's said I'm gonna read the rest of the story. Ja ne. ^_^
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Title: would make a great story
Reviewed By: inu_luver_2004 when signed in On: October 17, 2004 18:45 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it it had lots of deep feeling and the action was cool too. I would love to see this drawn out into at least a few more chapters... it would be cool to find out about Inu and Kouga.
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Reviewed By: EbilJo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 16:00 CDT
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Wow. Uber-goodness! I actually missed watching Jimmy Neutron for this, and that's a lot to say! lol. Great writing and keep it up!
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