| "Stepping Away from the Past" Reviews/Comments [ 113 ] |
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Reviewed By: ice vixen x On: April 24, 2004 02:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really likeing the plot, but you could slow it down a bit by making it longer and more detailed... you don't have to though, just an idea. keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: firedemon86(not signed on) On: April 23, 2004 15:02 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you fic maybe kikyo could die ;) but other then that great fic. Can't wait for more Hiei/Kagome so PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: clueless girl On: April 22, 2004 23:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
huh what impression did you have of kurama to think him as a pervert?
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Title: Kalima "Kitsune Yokai"
Reviewed By: o0ShadowXFox0o [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 15:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
You never cease to amaze me. Loved the chappy. Didn't like the cliffy though. Anyway, I enjoyed reading the new chappy. Hope you update again soon. Good luck and God bless.
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Reviewed By: red pen made in taiwan On: April 22, 2004 06:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yup keada does say ye a lot ye ye ye ye *does the 'ye' dance* oh yeah cool story hope continue spoon
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 23:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
plz update longer chpts!!!! good new chpt
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter! Please update soon!
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Title: Awesome Chapter 10
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome update. Update again soon. Can't wait to see how you plan on getting Hiei/Kagome together.
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Reviewed By: deityoddeath69 On: April 21, 2004 15:39 CDT
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awwwwwwww!!!...you sux, i mean that in a good why..hehehehe...n e ways you r a very got writer and no kurama is not a perv...lol...n e ways update soon
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Title: damn cliffies
Reviewed By: Gothic Rune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 14:34 CDT
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I HATE CLIFFHANGERSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.................... ...................................=__=;; I hate this not this story but that every story I have read today have left me hanging off the edge of a cliff waiting for the next chapter-.-;;
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: Lady Death (not signed in) On: April 21, 2004 14:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE!!!! MMMWWAHAHAHAHAAA!!!! PLEASE!!! I WILL KILL YOU AND BREING YOU BACK TO LIFE WITH TENSEIGA IF YOU DO NOT!!! MMMWAHAHAHA!! I LOVE IT!!! SESS/KAG/HIEI!!!!! PLEASE!!!!
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Reviewed By: inuyuyurrk [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 12:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
OOp i am really slow this mornig the crash was inuyasha!! hehe..."sit"
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Reviewed By: Shadow Nite [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 12:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, let me tell you a little secret, everybody loves cliffies as long as they're the one who writes them!! Anyways, I love this fic and hope you update soon. Jaa
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Reviewed By: inuyuyurrk [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 12:57 CDT
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LOL!! I bet it was hiei who fell out of a tree after she said that!! haha..Well it was really good! I love hiei/kag fics, when I can actually find one. U should make sess like her brother that seems right since inuyasha is his brother. Well anyways it was good hope u update agin soon!
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Title: AAAAWESOMME
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 15:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story. Update soon. Can't wait to see what caused Kagome to faint, how you get Hiei/Kagome together, and what happens to the Inu gang.
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