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Reviewed By: Snow_Bunnie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 22:45 CDT
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Well, I have to make Inuyasha jealous first, so he will try to compete and win her over. It's going to be pretty long. Inuyasha still is going to get Kagome, I think I might have to put them in a life-death situation frist though... IT WAS MY FRIENDS IDEA TO HAVE MIROKU GROPE HER!!! I SWEAR!!! Inuyasha is a dog demon right? So, I made him a little more doggie ^.^ Dogs like to sniff each other so I was bad ^.~ Bad me. I can't decide on how to make Inu crush on Kagome... I can't do it on looks alone... Inuyasha's not superfiction ne. I didn't know there were soooo many Inu/Kag fans. I personally like odd pairs ^.^ {Another evil laugh} But I'll keep it Kag/Inu, just to keep you guys happy. I'll update whenever I get the chance! (Although, my parents are out of town for the week, so I might get another chappie done)
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Title: the new inuyasha
Reviewed By: darren lee On: May 03, 2004 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
your crazy what the HELL! did you do like i told you kagome has to be with inuyasha because thats the rule. and what's up with inu sniffing kag in her butt for and inu deosn't like her yet and there right that was very short. this is a massed up story so write like when ti was a ok story!!!!!!!!!!!!!.
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Title: the new inuyasha
Reviewed By: darren lee On: May 03, 2004 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have to put kag with inu ok any ways now thats done with i think this is looking good i'm looking forward so write more you got that wench it better be strat in your minly sized brain. feh by the way put more action, ok. you did ok but don't think that your off the hike, but you could relacs for know.
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Reviewed By: ShadoFox14 On: May 01, 2004 21:19 CDT
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erm...ur joking bout the pairings, right? *sweat drop* oh and definitely inuyasha and kagome together, have her cry or something and he gets all mad but he's really concerned cause of his little thing bout not liking to see girls crying...just a suggestion...
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Title: Thanks Everybody!
Reviewed By: Bunnie! [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2004 13:27 CDT
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Ok, ok, I'll put Inu with Kagome ^.^ unless I get a million reviews telling me not to. Miroku's in the present because I like him and reeeeeeally wanted him in my fic so I messed with the plot a little ^.^ I am soooo special. But now I have to do some-more writting! It's a Love hate relationship ^.^ I think it'll be about 15-20 chapters. It'll take a couple months to get it finished though. But I am almost done with my school stuff ^.^ Wheeeeeeeeeeeeee! Thanks again for reviewing!
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Reviewed By: Hirakoru On: April 06, 2004 11:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
I liked it! It is real funny. Please put Inuyasha with Kagome
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Reviewed By: Jeiikoru On: April 06, 2004 11:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
I liked it but why is miroku in the present?
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Title: loved everyminute of it
Reviewed By: DemonStargirl On: April 06, 2004 11:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEDDDDDDD ! iT!
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Reviewed By: Sailorice On: April 06, 2004 11:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was really funny andinteresting I think that Inu should be with Kagome.
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Reviewed By: DemonAngel90 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2004 11:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it! really funny but you could make it more longer
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Reviewed By: DemonAngel90 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2004 11:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it!!Could you put another chracter n? Her name is Ryoko has long black hair, from Kagome's ime but holds an unusual power. And is a new student at Kagome's school. She also can pass through the well. Only if you want her to.
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Reviewed By: Geraldine On: March 21, 2004 12:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please put Kagome and Inuyasha together and hurry writing those chapters!!!! =^_^=
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Title: foxfire9
Reviewed By: foxfire9 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 08:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is really good. PLEASE put Inyuasha with Kagome!!!! It is soooooooooooo obvious!!!!
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Reviewed By: 1337 b4k4 On: March 18, 2004 13:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a pretty good fic, but inu seems a little ooc ya know, he's like not like that in the anime or manga. This is an interesting take on the story, update it soon.
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Reviewed By: V the anime fan On: March 17, 2004 15:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY, IT'S FANTASTIC!!!!!! I LOVE WRITTING REVIEWS!!!! Keep up the good work and I'm BEGGIN YA UPDATE WHENEVER POSSIBLE!!! See YA!! P.S. THIS STORY IS AWSOME!!!!!!
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