| "Youkai Lust" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 09:36 CST
Comment/Review:
write more please this is getting good
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 05:19 CST
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Noooooooooooo! Not the end of the chapter!!//////////// I actually didn't expect to like this story that much. But I do! Update soon!/////////////// PS- watch out for little mistakes like: "Where is him?"
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Reviewed By: noel&jenn On: March 29, 2004 21:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OHHH OHHH OHHH!! write more PLEASE!! its SOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD!!! HURRY!!!! NEED MY FIX!!! lol .. i like angst/semi-romance/forced but not really kind of stuff lol .. cant find too much of that on here lol .. so please .. POST MORE SOON!! lol thanks !!
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Title: good story
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 23:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Update soon. Can't wait to see what happens between Inuyasha and Kagome.
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_For_Ever (nli) On: March 22, 2004 22:59 CST
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cool, please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: monsterkittie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 01:02 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Has good potenital...please keep going
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 23:29 CST
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aww this seems like a cutely dark story..but that doesnt make much sense. you have really good writing skills for english not to be you fist language, lol better than a lot of people who have english as an only language. I cant wait for the next update.
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 20:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more please. it was a great story write more please.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 21:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it was very good start, and the grammer mistakes were not even major. I can't wait for your next chapter.
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